Hip Hop Forum

New remix I came up with thoughts? Is it clear? Understand most of it?

[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/elmodoesit/elmo-f ... nice-watch[/soundcloud]

Also, take a listen to this song i am working on:
http://picosong.com/dTL/

Let me know what yah think

honestly not very clear.
but u sounded like andre nickatina kinda.
ive never been a fan of mixing a vocal on tracks of a famous artist. cuz like in this case, u can tell a big difference in recordings.
ur raps seem decent, but from what i caught the context doesnt seem that meaningful honestly. keep at it tho.