PBL Week One: Omnie -VS- Enlightend (CLOSED Light KO)

[Speakers]

Week One
2 Bars
Due By: Sunday December 11th, 2011
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Goodluck

[Enlightend]

check!!!

[Omnie]

Chiiiieeeeeecccckkkkk!!!!!!

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[Speakers]

OMNIE

It's time to roast this beef well, I'll explain how when you're approaching females, they see you and rather go straight dyke and...
Bitches love to hear me spittin' that raw, fire, while En thinks all women are vampires the way they don't let light in

and...

How'd you beat Leeroy with multies that don't match and punches that don't land?... we all know Jenks won that meet
Bitch, even with a step stool you couldn't step up to me, now watch En's light dim, cuz I don't mean Friday or Saturday when I say it's the end of the weak


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Enlightend

im great your nothing, an im wastin punches, just to hear the same thing "oh-shit-E (O's shitty)" <- TRUE
check his sig, he cant admit hes through, honestly omnie, arts been canceled like budget cuts at city schools

already had the jerk awed with my first bar yep if he had a BOOK on LIGHT he still couldnt MATCH that
an if he shows his wack raps will get laughed at, but hey he got 6 wins so his losses just mean hes half ass

[JDR]

MVGT Light. Battle was a lot closer than I thought it would be. Omnie, ya first bar was really nice. If the second bar matched the first bars intensity, you woulda really challenged Light IMO.

Light, Decent bars. The first bar showed nice imagination and creativity. 2nd Bar lacked intensity but still enough to take this.

Good battle guys

[Quix]

i'm a half to agree with JDR ^

Very Close:


I'd say Light takes it. Both his bar were relitivley effective. Where omnies second bar sort of fell of a bit in comparison to his first one. Omnie, keep dropping in battles dude, your punches are really coming together nicely.

MVGT: Light

[CBK]

mvgt light.

nice opener by omnie but i felt the weak end punch was played obvious an a lil irrelevant tbh with the wordplay.

lights opener was stretched and off with the flow, but the punch saved that line for me and hit hard.

the second line also was slightly stretched, but still enlightend came harder than omnie.

niice battle an much respect for not no showing.