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Ordinary Love Shit (Pt. 4) {Snippet}

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 5:47 am
by GhoStWriDa001
Yeah, umm.. to all my failures in life.. Ughh..

No respect from her, she acted terrible, rude
Parents were only lacking arrogant views
Question was, "Whos that embarrassment Sue?"..
Made me feel worse, sadden bearable news
I couldnt ignore, choices that were placed
Listen to the past voices that were pained
Still asking, and asing who wronged instead
I couldve happen to had a move on and left
Well rested, blasting few songs cassettes..
She couldve been there before me to help
Those times we had sharing stories in bed
Only with issues, barely morally and threats
Parents just be angry and mad at you..
And me too, its crazy Im bad for you..
But real, lately your passed in school..
You were a aces on a roll, much to genre be it
But de-graded because you wasnt gonna see it
Straight ease, youd hadnt touch alot of Gs yet..
And..

Re: Ordinary Love Shit (Pt. 4) {Snippet}

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 6:53 am
by FatalX
"who's that embarrassment Sue"=best line
this is a snippet...why you would post this I dont know...this is a written section but I havent been here in a while so shit could of changed....Im sure this was a peice to a song or maybe I should have caught the begginning to all this

Re: Ordinary Love Shit (Pt. 4) {Snippet}

Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 7:09 am
by Haz
I'm taking it this is your OLS4 And Not Joe's ...

Re: Ordinary Love Shit (Pt. 4) {Snippet}

Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 3:31 am
by GhoStWriDa001
Haz.. Joe B doesnt have a part four..

FatalX.. Yeah im on mobile thats why.. It was off my head.. Til i get back on a computer i'll finish..

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Re: Ordinary Love Shit (Pt. 4) {Snippet}

Posted: Thu Dec 08, 2011 9:17 pm
by QwarterZ
Joe Budden is actually working on a Part 4 for your information

Joey>>>>>>>>>>

Re: Ordinary Love Shit (Pt. 4) {Snippet}

Posted: Wed Dec 14, 2011 8:48 am
by Haz
QwarterZ wrote:Joe Budden is actually working on a Part 4 for your information

Joey>>>>>>>>>>

word

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No respect from her, she acted terrible, rude
Parents were only lacking arrogant views
Question was, "Whos that embarrassment Sue?"..
Made me feel worse, sadden bearable news--

just keep getting stronger and I'm sure this will be nice.
I like how you end it off.. "sadden bearable news"
Paint's a picture. Keep it up

Re: Ordinary Love Shit (Pt. 4) {Snippet}

Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 6:34 am
by GhoStWriDa001
Thanx.. I try..

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