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Kau the Lion


Peep the titles of his written drops:
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/searc ... mit=Search


Bring yourself and 12 clones packing weapons, still, the winner here couldn’t be any clearer.
By the end of this section you’ll end up so red, Rum, you wouldn’t wanna peep in the mirror.

My technique is superior, changing the game. He’s painfully lame like I’m breaking his legs.
The K will spray, I’ll aim at his frame and get to MURKING as easily as rearranging his name.

It’s high time for violent things. Leave you with a battle scar cause you’re not Lion, King.
Just a royal pain in the ass. A statement of facts, not even the deaf would be signing him.

I’m primed to win. I got this shit on lock like your written drops. Kid, stop! You’re boring us.
I’m snoring, plus, how can you be considered hot if you’re not even finished warming up?

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King Rum


Chris


grab you by your clavicles rip you in half...
coz you ARE NOT a battler and your writtens ARE WACK...
Beat him before he walks to the ring!
kill his SELF ESTEEM..very 1st Lion to have his MAINE in a sling...LMAO!!

take your queen lyrically take your life....
Shove the Mic down your throat sounds like i skull fucked your wife!!!
Lucy stays on the back of me! lol
he can't stand it like he had a Cobias case of Acne...
LMAO!!

if you caught fire on your WEDDING DAY i wouldn't piss to put you out....
have you looking NASTY like you pulled a dick up out your MOUTH...eww
thas y there nothing to SAY...
no one likes you thats y you have 40 friends on myspace...

Christopher should hide names!!
treat lions like GAME, when my scope is in WIDE RANGE...
drop BOMBS on you when I'm in your zone...ur in ur home...
coz thas leaving you a lot more RUGGED then just BREAKIN BONES...


KILLED HIS SELF ESTEAM http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/self- ... 24821.html

HIS WIFE AND WEDDING
http://www.myspace.com/kauthelion/blog

40 FRIENDS ON MYSPACE
http://www.myspace.com/kauthelion

WORDPLAYS
BOMBS
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/bombs-vt20957.html

RUGGED
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/that- ... 20337.html

BREAKIN BONES
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/break ... 22101.html

laughing at your own bars like they was insane puns or plays or some shit.lol at you lol


straight cats kau

didnt like how you stretched the rhyme on the murking his name line ... seen you come harder man , an you gonna have to come harder if you wanna win the tourney.

The link that explains my last bar is fucked up. It has to be copied and pasted into the address bar. Or you can just click on King Rum's profile and then click the link for his written drops.

One is called "PANDA...LOCK ALL MY WRITTENS FROM NOW ON" and his two latest are called "The Warm up" and "The Warm Up 2.. (preparing)"

Bring yourself and 12 clones packing weapons, still, the winner here couldn’t be any clearer.
By the end of this section you’ll end up so red, Rum, you wouldn’t wanna peep in the mirror.
coo. dig the double pun on his name

My technique is superior, changing the game. He’s painfully lame like I’m breaking his legs.
The K will spray, I’ll aim at his frame and get to MURKING as easily as rearranging his name.
another coo name flips. good flow

It’s high time for violent things. Leave you with a battle scar cause you’re not Lion, King.
Just a royal pain in the ass. A statement of facts, not even the deaf would be signing him.
my least fav line so far. flow got lil off with him/king but would work better audio

I’m primed to win. I got this shit on lock like your written drops. Kid, stop! You’re boring us.
I’m snoring, plus, how can you be considered hot if you’re not even finished warming up?

this was a dope closer. flow was dope and punch/personal hit

goodshit kau.

-- Sun Dec 04, 2011 3:46 pm --

grab you by your clavicles rip you in half...
coz you ARE NOT a battler and your writtens ARE WACK...
Beat him before he walks to the ring!
kill his SELF ESTEEM..very 1st Lion to have his MAINE in a sling...LMAO!!
flows coo. this more of an audio sounding punch to me

take your queen lyrically take your life....
Shove the Mic down your throat sounds like i skull fucked your wife!!!
Lucy stays on the back of me! lol
he can't stand it like he had a Cobias case of Acne...
LMAO!!
wasnt feelin it rrather see name flips

if you caught fire on your WEDDING DAY i wouldn't piss to put you out....
have you looking NASTY like you pulled a dick up out your MOUTH...eww
thas y there nothing to SAY...
no one likes you thats y you have 40 friends on myspace...
i kinda laguhed at this

Christopher should hide names!!
treat lions like GAME, when my scope is in WIDE RANGE...
drop BOMBS on you when I'm in your zone...ur in ur home...
coz thas leaving you a lot more RUGGED then just BREAKIN BONES...
not sure if i got this or not but flow sounded choppy

punchs-kau
flow-kau
puns-kau
multis-kau
a shut out IMO. King was aite but just didnt seem llike his scheme was clean

vote-KAU

punches kau just, more clever in his flips,like the redrum shining reference, good nameflip, the deaf signing him[sign language] wordplays dope.
king, you had some decent stuff bro, but you need to learn how to flip a concept better, not just drop straight disses,even the personals are cool and pretty funny but just isnt really clever other than mentioning it..ex. your concept was 'no one likes you' and your flip is 'thats why you've got 40 friends on myspace', couldve said,

since noone likes you, makin that myspace page wasnt fun,cause the friends you got aint 'breaking 40' even as a clumsy drunk/

see, how i turned the concept around and fliped it with wordplay. you need to start integrating stuff like this if you want to elevate your verse..

personals- kau again his personal into flips were more polished

multis- kau

flow- tie, both used different ryme structure, one was short bar style other was long bar, and both were nice.

mvgt kau, pretty much a landslide imo. king just keep at it , you'll get there bro.

Is cbks vote a real vote...?? I just like it to be explained ...personally I think I went above and beyond the extent of personal

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CBKs vote has been tossed.


Current vote count:

Kau - 2
Rum - 0

Punches: kau
Personals: kau
Nameplay: kau
Wordplay:kau
Multies: kau
Flow: kau
Vocab:kau
final vote kau
im goin with anti imo i think its a ko

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