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6 bars.. and etc.. due whenever you czech in.. count this as my czech.. and thats that..

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Ok cool.. Due by tomarrow.. And do we send in the verse to Speakers??


My Links:

- c.b.k. vs meika
- t.o.y.h. vs quix

Quix

Expo:
- The movie 'Ghost'
-Ghost Wrida = GhostWriter


Prolly call on Herbs for your Protection; but First heres more suggestions! work on your Expressions!
cuz if you call yourself a 'Ghost Wrida' ... you must be the Worst At your Profession

so Jerk indure the Textin; subperb aggrestion shit on him large and send this Turd To Heaven
We ain't believing your claims ... cuz we've been 'Done with Ghost stories' since we Turned Eleven ..lol

i ain't accussing you of shit ... honestly lol ... cuz your far too shitty to Think you bite
infact ... try incorporating your 'whole name' and throw a Big white sheet over Every-thing you wride/Write

Wow, you should have Subtley Withdrew ... Cuz now your really in fucking Trouble dude, Confused?
let me explain, watching the 'Snooker finals' was the only time he's had his sites on a W with Q/cue

Can't belive this kids Trying to Prove, he can get laid without Providing a Ruffy? lol
i'm Dividing my groupies, so i'm a 'put a little money on Ghost' like Buying the Movie

I've dumbied kids in battles, but i'm clownin on Ghost this time with The Dopest lines
so i guess i'll finish with a little advice ... in Rap ... at least some of the Words are Supposed to rhyme




-vs-




Ghostwrida

Ima rookie thats great at words, he is shooken to say his verse
But I'll see you as another.. cause being G, Q is a cover --
That should be displayed for girls!

Im so rude homie fucker ya aint, and you phony nothing but fake
Me fighting with the fool, lame.. Him striking in a pool game --
Is when Qs only touching them 8s!!

Gho just shoot aiming to dead punks and, Quix you maybe ahead from it
No moxies of a talking.. his body dumped in water --
We watched Q laid in a red substance!!

My foes aint tense Im tougher now, this folk aint shit what a clown
And nigga this how you dumb.. we didnt discount Q puns --
Cause you dont make sense, so cut it out!!

Jobe gon dump the 8 as Quix, so go on fuckin' frailing kid
Youre crazy, stupid, bum go fool.. ya sayin' you can son Gho, Q??
Yeah, only if Gohan was your alias!!

Word? Your drops you strut alot, is worse and flops too fuck ya dawg..
I just urge to stop you cause ya soft, without a verse from Scott --
#YouSuckAlot!!!

(im done.. #EZ)

Upping for votes now..

Prolly call on Herbs for your Protection; but First heres more suggestions! work on your Expressions!
cuz if you call yourself a 'Ghost Wrida' ... you must be the Worst At your Profession
was pretty str8, multis solid aite name flip

so Jerk indure the Textin; subperb aggrestion shit on him large and send this Turd To Heaven
We ain't believing your claims ... cuz we've been 'Done with Ghost stories' since we Turned Eleven ..lol
punch was cool, liked that flip, the setup needed to be worked on tho

i ain't accussing you of shit ... honestly lol ... cuz your far too shitty to Think you bite
infact ... try incorporating your 'whole name' and throw a Big white sheet over Every-thing you wride/Write
idk bout this one...

Wow, you should have Subtley Withdrew ... Cuz now your really in fucking Trouble dude, Confused?
let me explain, watching the 'Snooker finals' was the only time he's had his sites on a W with Q/cue
cool lil name flip of your own name, flow was aite

Can't belive this kids Trying to Prove, he can get laid without Providing a Ruffy? lol
i'm Dividing my groupies, so i'm a 'put a little money on Ghost' like Buying the Movie
liked this punch line, rather see more lines like this and the ELEVEN line

I've dumbied kids in battles, but i'm clownin on Ghost this time with The Dopest lines
so i guess i'll finish with a little advice ... in Rap ... at least some of the Words are Supposed to rhyme
eh punch was sort generic or w/e but flow was coo

-- Tue Dec 06, 2011 9:02 am --

Ima rookie thats great at words, he is shooken to say his verse
But I'll see you as another.. cause being G, Q is a cover --
That should be displayed for girls!
idk punch was just worded weird but multis str8

Im so rude homie fucker ya aint, and you phony nothing but fake
Me fighting with the fool, lame.. Him striking in a pool game --
Is when Qs only touching them 8s!!

str8 punch but unless he claim to move drugs or something the punch doesnt hit as hard. regardless line was solid

Gho just shoot aiming to dead punks and, Quix you maybe ahead from it
No moxies of a talking.. his body dumped in water --
We watched Q laid in a red substance!!
wasnt feelin it, to much of a stretch

My foes aint tense Im tougher now, this folk aint shit what a clown
And nigga this how you dumb.. we didnt discount Q puns --
Cause you dont make sense, so cut it out!!
best line you had, should focus on these types of punchs

Jobe gon dump the 8 as Quix, so go on fuckin' frailing kid
Youre crazy, stupid, bum go fool.. ya sayin' you can son Gho, Q??
Yeah, only if Gohan was your alias!!
no

Word? Your drops you strut alot, is worse and flops too fuck ya dawg..
I just urge to stop you cause ya soft, without a verse from Scott --
#YouSuckAlot!!!
notreally connecting, just sounds weird


Punchs-Quix
Multis-TIE
Puns-TIE
FLOW-Quix

vote-quix, his verse was more consistent but both yalls structure was weird to read.

QUIX:

Prolly call on Herbs for your Protection; but First heres more suggestions! work on your Expressions!
cuz if you call yourself a 'Ghost Wrida' ... you must be the Worst At your Profession

NOT BAD..

so Jerk indure the Textin; subperb aggrestion shit on him large and send this Turd To Heaven
We ain't believing your claims ... cuz we've been 'Done with Ghost stories' since we Turned Eleven ..lol

KINDA FUNNY. WORDING WAS WEIRD

i ain't accussing you of shit ... honestly lol ... cuz your far too shitty to Think you bite
infact ... try incorporating your 'whole name' and throw a Big white sheet over Every-thing you wride/Write

I THINK I GET THIS? LOL.. I LIKED IT THOUGH.

Wow, you should have Subtley Withdrew ... Cuz now your really in fucking Trouble dude, Confused?
let me explain, watching the 'Snooker finals' was the only time he's had his sites on a W with Q/cue

HUH?

Can't belive this kids Trying to Prove, he can get laid without Providing a Ruffy? lol
i'm Dividing my groupies, so i'm a 'put a little money on Ghost' like Buying the Movie

NAHHHH, NOT FEELIN IT

I've dumbied kids in battles, but i'm clownin on Ghost this time with The Dopest lines
so i guess i'll finish with a little advice ... in Rap ... at least some of the Words are Supposed to rhyme

WEAK CLOSER.. I DIDNT LIKE THIS VERSE QUIXY!




GHOSTWRIDA:

Ima rookie thats great at words, he is shooken to say his verse
But I'll see you as another.. cause being G, Q is a cover

THIS WASNT BAD. HORRIBLY WORDED.

Im so rude homie fucker ya aint, and you phony nothing but fake
Me fighting with the fool, lame.. Him striking in a pool game --
Is when Qs only touching them 8s!!

NO. FORCED MULTIS.

Gho just shoot aiming to dead punks and, Quix you maybe ahead from it
No moxies of a talking.. his body dumped in water --
We watched Q laid in a red substance!!

NO.

My foes aint tense Im tougher now, this folk aint shit what a clown
And nigga this how you dumb.. we didnt discount Q puns --
Cause you dont make sense, so cut it out!!

WOW. MUCH BETTER BAR HERE!!

Jobe gon dump the 8 as Quix, so go on fuckin' frailing kid
Youre crazy, stupid, bum go fool.. ya sayin' you can son Gho, Q??
Yeah, only if Gohan was your alias!!

NO.

Word? Your drops you strut alot, is worse and flops too fuck ya dawg..
I just urge to stop you cause ya soft, without a verse from Scott --

^BEST BAR OF THE BATTLE!!


QUIX TOOK THIS IN EVERY CAT.
GHOST, U NEEDA PROOF READ UR BARS. MAKE NO SENSE
VOTE: QUIX

I'll admit i cant word correctly but i was sorta rushing a bit.. But im down for round two if needed.

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punches quix a bit weak this time around but enough to get the job done,i'd say he edges ghost in this regard because ghost's wording was terrible and awkward which lowered the strenght of your verse...

personals quix better nameflips, ghost had alot of name flips but the q = anything related to pool against him is really tired already...and the rest of the q flips if worded better in your lines wouldve made your verse a lot better,

multis quix , ghost, some of your shit ws kinda weird,dead punks and, red substance is forced as fuck imo, you tried to do multis which is a good thing, but couldnt maintain it thru out, you then went down to a really basic 2 syllable end rhyme which is hella weak and the attempts at multis were kinda weak,

flow quix,ya verse was fairly standard stuff, nothing really different, ghost, your verse was shorter but read awkward at times,



mvgt quix, for a better read..

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thanks for voting

I can clearly see my rhymes went overheads as well.. But round two is what takes this round and the second.

-- Wed Dec 07, 2011 9:46 am --

So if I win round two.. That goes as 2 wins same for Quix.

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