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Regular house rules as stated by JDR


Remeber...send your verse to speakers.

NEVERODDOREVEN

Expos:
prose in the pen/ pro's in the pen (penitentiary)
Q tips clear ears to make things sound better
His avatar pic is Jadakiss
Q in a hole, corner pocket = game of pool

Qu ix, I'll tear your name apart and separate between you and who's dope
My punches got you toothless and broke, watch me stack those cor(o)ner pockets by puttin' Q in a hole!!

Cause sticks and stones will split your bones... Wit and jokes will just appear dumb
But a little dose of Quix's flows will break your fucking eardums

See...

Droppin soap for some men who use to throw in bullpens is the closest you've been to prose in the pen'
You're hopelessly dense and wouldn't be dope if you did another 2000 posts all over again

See, I clown contenders by compounding letters to bring confounding measures
I doubt you'd ever amount to clever or win a joust with Never...
Someone get Q musical tips for his ears so it starts sounding better!!!

You got no bars, just names with some flips, and I bet Jada would get
Amazingly pissed if he knew some lady named Quix had taken his pic and left him portrayed as a BITCH



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QUIX

Expo:
-URL to his facebook page. lol http://www.facebook.com/pages/Never-Odd ... 0729641029
-Nomvebers done...time to cut the movember stashes

Ok look,

No showed me originally, well this month is finsihed, Your officially Novembers Past
you got no Clever Facts text is whack, so i'm a 'cut him up faster' than his Mo-Vember Stasch

I've seen those kids you battled ... all either LAME OR JUST PLAIN SHOOK; but i'll mangle your Teeth and BRAINS WITH THE SAME HOOK
this fags FAMOUS FOR GAY LOOKS; you didn't think i new?? for proof?? ... just Plug his NAME INTO FACEBOOK///

Handing you your first L, well thats my PLEASURE MAN; this kid hasn't got laid, and has no reason to wear the rubber like the WEATHER MAN
your an idiot, you ain't CLEVER AND i ain't talking 'Peter Pan at the bar' when i say Shots from Never, NEVER LAND/////

I'm a swing the blade and SLIT THIS LAME IN TWO till SCRIPTS INFLAME THIS DUDE leaved him cooked right cuz QUIX IS TRIANED WITH FOOD
here, let QUIX EXPLAIN FOR YOU ... cuz if ya'll didn't no 'Neveroddoreven goes both ways??' just FLIP HIS NAME FOR PROOF////

your nothing original...all you 'do is repeat scripts' so i'll 'put you to sleep bitch' like mixing NYQUIL WITH HARD SHIT
your raps are repetitive and pure trash...but then again your doing what your supposed tooo...and thats RECYCLE YOUR GARBAGE/////


About time you showed up
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Punches-Quix
Vocab-Never
Multies-Quix
Structure-Never
opening-Never
close-Never
personals-tie=both did nice job
this is my personal opinion both did great job on personals
keep it up
my vote goes to =Never

Punches.. quix his were better... more clever and harder hitting

Personals.. quix the "personals" were mostly name flips and and his were more original.. neveroddoreven u gotta think more outside the box

Enjoyment.. quix... his verse was just better put together most of his punches hit... and the flow was easy to follow even with a more complex scheme

Multis... quix his just connected better... simple

So yeah cat sweep quix....

niiice battle imo.

id give this battle to quix. but neveroddoreven took flow and enjoyment for me.

quix's lines were set up better but hang on im sure i've seen these bars elsewhere an voted on em <...........?????

1-1. CBK, your votes not to clear. Breakdown the cats or somethin so they know who you votin' for.

UPPin 4 VOTES

how do i take multies and punches, but his closer and opener were better than mine? I'm confused...lol

anyways:

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/voter ... 24957.html


^^^^ Please follow those Cats, or voting outline. and PLEASE don't make up your own cats (Fatal) lol




uppin for votes

Personals- damn gotta give this to quix he just got more personal to me...

Punches-i felt quix... yo never we went hard also but quix just stood out more to me...

Creativity-this goes to Never...I clown contenders..
that start leading to the end other second bar I felt wuz creatively strong and also stuck out...

Multies- quix multies connected better ...never had multies out the ass I just think he fell short a Tad...only being fair never...

Flow- quix's piece wuz easier for me to read...

Entertainment-i enjoyed both but quix verse just I feel stuck out a lil more...

Vote:...quix

Never ur dope...I wud just say be more flamboyant with your battles verses just to make the reader forget bout who ur goin against ...

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Punches: Quix
Personals: Quix (Never didn't have any)
Wordplay: Tie
Nameplay: Never
Multies: Never (Some of Quix felt forced to me.)
Flow: Tie

Good battle, but Quix had harder punches and some decent personals. Never needs to mix it up more. Come at him with more than just nameplay.

+1 Quix

punches- close, but quix just more creative..

personals-quix, just came with different personal concepts, and flipped them,
alot of cats unknowingly make the mistake of thinking that merely installing a personal is enough, its a combination, of flipping it in a creative way, never you came with a few nameflips. the q in the hole was a decent billiards play, also the q tip was decent try, not quite strong tho imo..

multis-this was close,i'd say edge to never , for complexity, and rhyme scheme usage... quix was nice too so this was very hard to decide,

flow-never felt polished, multis were more relevant imo, read natural, like complete sentences....

bottom line mvgt quix dope battle fellas,

4-1 Quix...closed?

after finding out why these bars were reposted mvgt to quix for all of the reasons illokwent stated,this battle was close as fuck its like complexity an detail verse simplicity an flow...

mvgt to quix but id give overall enjoyment and fave line in the battle to never ... the jada closing line was niiiice flowed perfectly an closed the battle epicly.

quix made some played concepts original with his wording an set ups, his punchlines just seemed to have more going on than never did. good battle. quix 5-1 ... close it up

Quix wins 4-1

Battle closed & Records Updated