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I work a part time job, and I don't make a lot
But if I quit then there's a line of unemployed to take my spot
You'd never know it from the way that I shop,
Cause when my car broke down I found a blazer to cop
Maxed out my credit card, still ain't got a second car
But my wardrobe can score hoes for sure yo
Home got foreclosed, cause I used my mortgage for clothes
I couldn't afford both....And I'm so obsessed with the attention
That if I don't get it from the women then I'm stressed
perplexed and second guessin, questionin
There must be something wrong with your estrogen
Bartender, get that girl an extra gin
And maybe I can have her up at the hotel by 12
But by 2, hope you know what to do...
Cause I got plans in the morning and they don't involve you
Baby girl got braces to straighten her teeth
Whitened by a laser machine to make em look clean
She might be trynna compensate for the wait that she thinks
Cause her mouth's real pretty but ain't saying a thing
Rhinoplasty on her nose, making it shrink
She can't even blow it no more, she gotta dab it at the sink
Hold up the phone, she told me she old fashioned
Now she at the store like "That was the OLD fashion"
You're so fake, girl...you're so plastic
Got ONE zit and you're rolling in pro-active
Now me, I've met material girls before,
but truthfully, you should be known as your own fabric
Trynna hook up with me, it ain't happenin
I can't fool wit a half wit
Nope....take that bullshit and pack it, up
and get away....don't care, them ain't your real tits anyways

Lmao I like it! Reflective, projective, and jist the right length. Seemed to have an odd start to me but you definitely worked it out. I also dated that girl. I feel for you lol.

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Very poignant. Nice multies and flow made this very enjoyable to read. I like that you addressed both genders, as well. This was my favorite part:

Baby girl got braces to straighten her teeth
Whitened by a laser machine to make em look clean
She might be trynna compensate for the wait that she thinks
Cause her mouth's real pretty but ain't saying a thing

Overall, nothing to criticize here. Good shit.

yo this whole thing wuz a ILL read props LJ ....alot of humor...