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just thought i'd let y'all peep lol

Sometimes i sit back and think lifes harder then it seems,,
all we do is chase our dreams,,
and most of us don't acheive,,
i just can't believe,,
but fuck life it's just a bad routine,,
it gets to the point were i don't wana breathe,,
i just wana take a gun to my head and leave,,
but if i told you i was guna do it would you stop mee ?,,

NO!, because people love to take advantage and be fake//
fuck ending my life it'l be yours i take/

see i only care for a few people,,
i wonder if i'm gods angel or satins equal,,
maybe his prequal,,

psyco crazy bitch yes i know this/
come up from behind and end your life without notice/
now focus/

i may seem like a normal person walking down the street,,
nahh i'm the type a chick you don't want your kids to meet

I like it Big Meik. Stop being such a stranger and come around and put a little more work in. We need more female emcees around here.

Rhymes were simple but it flowed well and that's really more important than the multies. Not bad otherwise. I think this is a topic we can all relate to at some time.

you've come a long way since the last time I saw anything from you mieka your by the time your my age your gonna be one of the sickest female emcees outthere keep it up

simple rhymes but it packed emotion and flowed nice. Pretty good young'n

Yooo..I love real shit and anger thas like my WHOOOLE LIFE...i like this read... even tho it still was basic wording and rhymes Ican tell u weren't going for that...the focus was your self...which i believe to be a big part of exquist writing...Nice interested and want to read more..

by the time your my age your gonna be one of the sickest female emcees outthere keep it up

^Agreed^

MonuMental wrote:I like it Big Meik. Stop being such a stranger and come around and put a little more work in. We need more female emcees around here.

yo mental dont be tryin holla at my meika
lmao

Anyway, meika you know how i felt bout this piece, shits good. Im actually surprised at how well you have your rhyme scheme down and the fact you also dont just type random rhymes but encompass a story behind your rhymes which is even more difficult, at such a young age you def on the right track to go.

Yo this was some grimey shit..lettin them know whats good..
I felt anger in this piece..putting your foot down on them.
thanks for the drop