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LiLl Suttin

Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 11:04 am
by -TraMaTiK-
poetry iz rappin a silent expression of mind
words hurd ta make succession off of a rhyme
i aint tryna be lyrikal but sum souljaz we need em
ta bring a breath of fresh air and sum freedom
i was told time runs fast so the fun times
u juz gotta go and triple that
i try but like rain drops
my memories seem ta ripple back..

i didnt no where ta place this .shrugs..but i thought it was more poetryish

so..if yall wud leave a lil suttin lol -1-

Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 8:57 pm
by MesaR
Not bad dont talk msn talk its to hard 2 read when under standing the concept of poetry.......... cause poetry and that gangster talk dont work out very well lol.

Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2006 1:54 am
by -TraMaTiK-
lol ye idk i wuz 1/2 baked so lol but thanx