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The Warm up...
Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2011 5:25 pm
by KING RUM12
3 losses! i need to ReMaIn CaLm...
even if i think these LaMeZ wRonG...
fuck rookies i need vets to BaNg oN
before I'm elevated to cHanGe FoRm...
I was crowned to wAgE wAr...with guns n RaGed sWords to
put rappers under PAveD FlOoRs with battlers n RaPeD WhOrEs...
respect King or i'll make u PrAy LoRd coz battlin me is like playin the saw game on StAgE 4....
show u wut I use GrenAdes fOR...when I move BrIgAdeS fOrWarD
my bombs ill knock you out of H4's...u guys give me the cHuCkLeS...
more then gAy CouPLes ...I shud take 100% of ur HuStLE and if u defy me! im pulling teeth out of my KnUcKles....ur rhymes SupPLe...
leave u DiSaBleD for uttering FaBLes
Re: The Warm up...
Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 11:47 am
by Glamtrash
Quite an abrupt ending, don't we think? Lol and I'm really not a fan of your presentation, at all. But as far as the writing goes, it's not terrible. Work out the little shit, and keep em comin.
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Re: The Warm up...
Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 11:59 am
by KING RUM12
yah.....its the warm up...
Re: The Warm up...
Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 12:18 pm
by Glamtrash
I can read lol. I assumed in putting it here you wanted feedback. That's mine lol.
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Re: The Warm up...
Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2012 4:28 am
by leeroi green
haha well i liked it pretty decent for an exersise
Re: The Warm up...
Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:51 pm
by Blake Downs
this shit was ight,not bad,could use a lil bit of work