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5 BarZ... dropped by afternoon tomorrow Check...1 no crew votes plz

check, i aint in a crew so its cool.... i got work tomoz so i'll rush a diss out tonight.

Yep

listen RUM KING something, fag i'll have you CRUMBLING, setting it up was a DUMB THING,
no homo,but if i was to rape you it wouldn't be the first time youv'e had "COME" IN YOUR BUM RING.
from what i've read rum (red rum) you aint DROPPING THE BEST FORCE, i do nothing but TEXT RAWS,
in fact stop rapping, this battle is solving nothing im just FLOGGING A DEAD HORSE.
king rum like microwave ding done, if you got heat then bring some before your all gone like bings son.
its a bitter pill distill an kill rum,
spill some, this kid will drink his fill son
were known for underage consumption here in the british kingdom..

you Can't Be KiDDiN.. u shudnt battle stick to WrIttEns....I wud hv to
giv u ALL of mY RhyMeS for urs to have a LifE LinE...cuz ur flow is
as soft as wHiTe wInES...bust in ur home at the hours of PrImE tImE..
he punches like fIvE tImEs............
then realizes he's goin against a TeRmInAtOR tYpE 9...

fInD his body in PiPe LinEs...OMG is it.....is it CBK??....
that bitch goin look like a victim of the BTK's!!!...(Bind Torture Kill serial killer)
ha haaaa i bet ur CD's GaY and i kill wack rappers soon ull be where my feCEs LaYs... goSh hes bRavE...KiNg Rum..I fEel FaggoTs aBBreViaTe...

mangle you in front of ur sEcToR...think he gettin chased by LeCtoR
or a tsunami the way i make u hv to sustain this PresSurE...
punch you quicker then TesTerS n chop u up wit multis equivalent to DeXtEr<<<(serial killer show)...i'll shoot CBK this is the WeSt-ErNs RuM ill make ur ChEsT-BuRn...

ur the illest whack dude I've EvEr HeaRD...congratulations i gave u more props then u'v EvEr HeaRD...use ur written rhymes for toilet paper after TeRDs...CBK's goin know where u don't even hv a chance at ThIrD...
wuts the iLLest wOrD!!..CBK is the biggest NeRD that carries the biggest PuRsE...replyin to my callout message is ordering the biggest HeaRsE...

Y u steppin on my TuRF!...u don't see those LaNd MiNeS??
niggaz RuN Up n get BlOwN uP all the DaMn TiME...
rip u til ur fAnS MiNe... u thought it wuz the ChAmPs TiMe til I left
u saltier then LaMB PiNe....

hmm well i idk how to call this one.....

Rums lines were waaaaayyyy stretched..
i dont think ive ever seen somebody stretchem like that ..
i was'nt feelin that structure tbh..srry bro lotsa personals but nothin hard hittin imo......

CBK..Dude your punches are gettin waaay better..but your bar count fell majorly short..remember 2 lines equals 1 bar in text so you should utilize that ..to maximize your scripts....

i was about to give this one to rum cuz he came with more even if i cut out his entire last verse (wich i did).but CBKs punches were aight this time..you know what nvm forget it

ya'll need to up ya text game a lil more...

I'll Vote ...Rum by a Bum hair..

rum, just had more content, even though it wasnt that great, cbk, seems like you werent into this battle and it showd in your effort...

mvgt rum... more quantity in disses

i said to rum king i had to rush the verse to meet the deadline... anyway its quality not quantity. 2 nil king rum .uppin

-- Sat Nov 26, 2011 12:25 am --

an just for the record if your counting bar limits we would BOTH be dq'd.

I have to agree with Tru saying Rum streeeeetched his bars wayy to much..Even though Rum had more lines and stuff,I personally think CBK was nicer...I liked CBK's consistency and flow,punches were okay..not hard hitting,not wack either..overall...I enjoyed CBK's verse more..Vote CBK!

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2-1 king rum, uppin .

CBk i was dissapointed in your verse. I've seen these nice pieces and battle verses from you latley then this?? Not trying to start another beef with you i'm just saying, never take anyone lightley. I'm slowley learning this myself. half my losses are because i'm under estimating my opponent.

Aigh my vote is like this.

CBK the stuff you did write was decent. good flow at times and decent content. but it didn't have any real punches...and the only bar that looked like a punch ...sounded realll gay. but having said that ... it wasn't bad.

Rum had more direct punches that actually sort of hit. lol he actually dropped 5 bars, i think CBK only dropped like 3 maybe 3 and half. but that is not swaying my vote, it merely means Rum had more chances to hit CBK and he did



MVGT: Rum, slightly

CBK - A lil basic bruh. I think you elevating but you need to be more direct. I liked the multies but the overall punch effect just wasn't there.

King - Really stretched flow. It takes away from your verse. You have some decent lines and concepts so just shorten your flows

Punches - King
Multies - CBK
Flow - CBK
Nameplay - Nothing really worth mentioning
Vote - King...barely. If CBK had a few punches, this would of been close. King, just shorten ya lines and you'll do fine here.

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King wins, TKO
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