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this is a short one i did for a Tourney Elsewhere..

lmk what ya'll think feed is returned...


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to be honest man.... i kinda hated this haha.... the verse is dope (obviously) haha but that beat man i hate it... and i think its what makes you fall off ur game a tad.. homie i'd say trash that beat... save it for a freestyle or something.... or a battle or somethin... but if thats for a mixtape or album release... i'd say no... cuz the lady thats doin that singing is annoying and it drowns you out at points...

thats my thoughts on it tho... someone may hear it differently but thats my take on it.... but good effort cuz i had a track that sounded good while i was writing it... but it just went to shit on the mic and i'm so disappointed in it haha... we all have those days homie...

The hook sounds pretty nice and clean, mixing sounds real nice on it too...

beat has an up beat positive vibe. Lawgix kinda right but i dont fully agree...flow and delivery on point, nothing to say bout that. lyrics is nice and really thought you did this shit proper...this a kinda beat id pass cuz it aint my steez. but this shit sounds good i think. to each his own though... good stuff tre stay grindin.

well thanx for the feed guys to each their own..i did this for a producer / Rapper colab tourney elswhere..they pair you up wid a producer and you gotta werk with the beat he gives you..unfortunately this was the beat i got from the producer i was partnered with..wich imo was probly his best beat, so unfortunately thats why i used this one..tbh i wasnt very fond of the beat @ first( you can actually hear me say im about to "shine a turd right now") haha im talkin about the beat....but i do like the actual song..wierd ..dont forget to leave links so i can rtf...1