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5 barZ I'm at work...the quickest way I do it is by 3 am tomorrow ...check.1

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check i'll drop in 20 minutes




No chance your winning this you can only Partly dream .... your unknown, and Hardley Seen
yell all you want, cuz my BARS'LL SCREAM and 'Knock Down Rum faster' than Charlie sheen

call you knock knock, cuz you a joke a fucking lame, internet geeek prolly Hoping his text Trends
sonnin this clown and leaveing 'Rum on the ground' like Toasting to Dead Freinds

look you've never rapped live nigguh ....you no show, ain't never Rocked-a gig
Blast techs and this hore and leave his 'head on the floor' like his Bottom Sig

My punches'll leave you in da Gravel wid the worms, he's Rattled, don't concern-me
cuz the voters here 'No show for you in this battle' like both my opponents in-the tourny

i'll Banish this Elf, cuz he keeps asking himself...really??? Can he Knock me out??
theres no fight in his text, so i'll go 'light on his best punches, and still win' ... like Manny Paquio


G'luck King

hes a Rap Professional? he spits on testicles...
and dances to katy Perrys extraterrestrials...
knuckles to face even after i beat you to a vegetable...
The only way you could suck more is if your head game was Impeccable...

He wana swing when I'm known to rattle crowns...
Snap your neck Quik, after I'll put you under the Battle Ground...
Quix cudnt be sick even wit 2 million diseases on his dick...
talkin like you NICE..who are you the guy from Hitch??...

Ur a Quick snitch taddle tells to the BoYS?...
real recognize real, buddy still probably playin wit his TOYS...!!
QUICK commit suicide be4 you pick up that Mic Phone...
Cuz if I hear a light tone, I'll Burn you up Quicker then A niCe bOnG....

you haVe balls 2day... only because you stepped in the ring with cassias clay...
PunchES giVE YOU THE NASTIEST FACE...
Im the happiest TO SAY That I'm going to close all oxygen to your wind pipe in the fastest of ways...

Im looking to KILL YOU FUCK A BATTLE SPAR!!!...
ur NOt worthy Of yoUr Avatar...
Your not wack, your about to be hot as FUCK ...
soaked in gasoline as soon as I strike this match your out of Luck...

ok Votes please

punches- quix, not the best i seen from you but, more than enough to do the job, didnt like how you kept using the word 'like' like a million times in this verse...lol... but pretty text book... king, again much of it was generic random punches, i did however like the fact that you made some references to your opponent , other than you made attempts at concepts and metaphors, but still just didnt really have much wit to it... ex. couldnt be sick with 2 million diseases? your concept is sick, and your flip is diseases? damn dude, that shits hella weak....also, burn you up quicker than a nice bong... again, wheres the wit in that, this is basic metaphors, that wouldnt hold up in the 90s...let alone now. step your game up bro, read shit from quix, jdr, etc..etc..or other top battlers on this site, see what their verses have in common, and go from there..

personals quix, very text book, liked that shit, dissed him about most of his shit, couple of nameflips is nice.. king pay attention, use your opponents personals as concepts and turn that shit around on them.. thats the best way to land punches..

multis quix ,

flow tie, both came nice wit the different structures , long bar as opposed to short bar style... dont know if king really knows what im talkin about but oh well....

mvgt... quix, by a fair margin... any questions pm me.

Well,this was an alright battle imo,quik gave a decent verse with some interesting punches,I liked the charlie sheen bar,king fell short cuz he didn't execute some of his set ups,or didn't think of Decent concepts,personals are key and make the battle more direct and the punches more exciting king ,use more . Everything but flow goes to quix,did feel rums flow a lil more and an easy read. Mvgt quix

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thanks for voting ... uppin

Punches - Quix
Multies - Quix
Flow - Quix
Disses - Rum
Vote - Quix

Rum - You need to be more direct. Your creative but need to find a way to word your creativity in a bar. No solid hard hitting disses but decent effort

Quix - Nice use of nameplay. The charlie sheen opener bar killed it for me.

Quix Wins by KO - Battle Closed, Records Updated