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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/attn- ... 24799.html

JDR. Just Dick Ridin did they mention you in that topic...?
My advice....stop it be4 I stick blades in you deeper then kunive pockets ...
My solution. get Hate crimed...for your gay mind...
Yah your hard as fuck, cuz u can't even get guyz
below your waist line...

He raps n takes time ..is this bitch in the shower...?
Im sure you can feel my power...
thats wen JD Runs more then thieves n cowards....
Bury you alive, he'll come up as seasonal flowers...

He'll be missing for hours,wanting to go home...
Next to a sink hole Theyll find your fone', filled with cuddling tones...but can't find your lovely bones...<<(movie with makwahlberg his daughter is murdered similar)
Moms wishin for a clone to make you a has been ...like the parents in Godsend...<<(movie where there son dies and doctor offers to clone there son)

Get riddled wit pencils n pens...ur illest team cudnt hold your back...he tried to tagteam but I kill in couples like I copied the ZodiAc...<<(serial killer that kills couples and has never been caught)

No signs I'm neutron on nuttin nation...
And still ill run up on you he think my gang racin...
Beat your face in...like Bruce Willis on the yellow dude in sin city...
He raps I since pity...soft as milf titties...pussy ass I'm goin greet you like hello Kitty ...<<(hello Kitty is a brand of stuff for lil girls)

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-- Fri Nov 25, 2011 9:30 am --

jsteel-vs-jdr-vt24762.html

Light work. Somthin' Quick


Fuck tha Fightin' & the Yellin', his Caked Up Spits be some Made Up Shit like the Myans & their Tellins
Ya problems not ya Writin', its ya Spellin, another mobile device verse but we not Buyin' what you Cellin'

Sonny's Rhymin' wit a Hellion puttin' ya Heart to the Test, leave ya Parts in a Mess like a Car in a Wreck
Face it nigga, you Hardly the Best, to Stomach Run Bull anymore prolly means you Starvin' to Death

Punches leavin' Scars on ya Text for tryna Spar wit a Vet, causes an automatic to Cancel Flows
Even ya avy is a Sample Though, to understand that if you Step to this pussy, tha pic aint the only Camel Toes

And Obviously, I handle hoes, his internet style like a basketball defense, it gets Confused wit Screens
He gettin Abused it Seems, cos if everybodies tryna Slap Jack, tell me what's the Use of Kings?

But the Truth I Bring, Spewed can Chew the Mood of Things, cos Dude, I'm Mean and you's Torn in Ripped
Believe me sonny, ya Swarmed wit Fist, enough to leave this nigga King Sonned like bein' Born a Prince

Catsweep to jdr...king was a little weak with his punches but did alright...jdr verse wasnt his best,but good none the less...i liked his.Rums concepts were good and he tryta be creative but i think he failed at executing that idea ...
Mvgt jdr

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-- Thu Dec 01, 2011 12:02 am --

This is the 3rd time i voted on this battle,it kept getting erased when submitd ..thats why my votes not more detailed

Yup Catsweep JDR

Had better punches, Flow, wordplay ... all around better battle verse.


MVGT: Jack

Thx 4 peepin. 2-0

Fuck...nice battle Jack

Catsweep to Jack. He was just stronger all-round. He had the better flow to his verse, stronger punches and a more complex structure. Jack did come out pretty weak, but his verse was more than enough to convince me he won. It wasn't a bad attempt from Rum, he had a good idea of content - it was creative and was less generic compared to Jack's. You can do with some elevation though. Just keep on battling for improve ment Rum and you'll get there ... Peace

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thanx for that feed.....gud battle J

king you came decent but, jdr just has a more polished verse in every cat, flow, multi usage, rhyme shceme and flips... but keep battlin king your improving aloth bro... these battles are steppin stones, and your only as good as the opponents you face..

mvgt jdr

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