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Tree man still,
tree house of horror,
i write like im an author, im an artist
and theyll prolly never find me,
cuz im so bright its blinding,
always been an ugly duckling so i swan dive into escapes,
but that wont earn me estates,
why must my soul be at stake?
i just wanna be great, not a wanna be..
what am i gonna be?
not evil hopefully
cuz thats what my opponents be,
thoughts of a drunken me...

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/frigh ... ml#p184866

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/got-a ... ml#p184867

This flowed pretty smooth for just a lil excerpt. Even though it was short it was cool. Nothin to correct, really, you're doin you. Stay up, ya drunk mofo.

Word. Btw, that was your 420th post
Meant to be?
Probably...
Treed

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This was alright for what it was. Not much there to really review but there were a couple of real good bars like:

and theyll prolly never find me,
cuz im so bright its blinding,
always been an ugly duckling so i swan dive into escapes,
but that wont earn me estates,