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NICE, thank you for the second shot because i would love to have a rematch against jack in the finals

I spit on ya future, mind-controlled puppet just a loser
You's headstrong, but y'a just another fake rap abuser
Accuse me of some, I double dare ya before I shoot ya
Precise darts thrown at ya brim, headless hen it's over

Gimicky fake rapper best if you wrap it up, cause y'a ain't got a future
You can beg me for a feature, but I slay low-life creatures

You no lifer, broke joke, dick rider, slow-pokin', trickin' lame rhymer

You can't fool me B, cant feel me B. for real this 's real talk from a O.G.

I'm on a O.D.B tip, best R.I.P. 'n forget who you wanna-be real quick

Can say this without thinking, you 'n the herd 1 and the same breathren.

History in the making, I'm putting future in a garbage can

Slam that fuckah shut, you 'n the rest of'em mothafuckas can shut the fuck up

wow.... ok FUTURES BACK!!!! lol

like head & sex u BLOW-&-SUCK, but GM made sure that illests HOPES-WERE-UP
well thats till illest realized that i was gonna have to bring the dope for BOTH-OF-US

my SICK-SCRIPTS-FLIP the BRITS-SHIT-QUICK, so u wanted the future THIS-IS-HIS
but whats he gonna do, when his raps are uglier then the BITCH-IN-KIDS SIG-PIC-IS

i dug up some dirt then i START-TA-THINK he aint worth the time ta DROP-A-LINK
honestly!!! only time he bring a punch to a battle is if he was in CHARGE-A-DRINKS

i think u LOST-IT-EARLY shit when i said wow, u was already DROPPED-N-HURT-D
in fact im positive that this battle should have already been STOPPED-FOR-MERCY

but fuck it im a KEEP-GOIN-NOW but i'll just aim low until ur KNEES-BLOW-OUT
and devious you can call my punches "Gwen Stefanie" cause they LEAVE-NO-DOUBT

ok its DIMINISHING-TIME i hope that was a quick key cus i took 3 MINUTES-ON-MINE
and still i dont even have ta FINISH-MY-LINES..................................................................

This is an easy vote for Future. devious didn't throw any punches and his multies were weak, too.

Punches: Future
Personals: ---
Wordplay: Future
Nameplay: ---
Multies: Future
Flow: Tie

+1 Future

punches future
personals future
multis future

flow eh,

dev, your verse was ok, nothing spectacular, simple but a bit basic in my book, no real strong punches, just standard matter of fact disses,,end rhymes were poor,

future, you are tryin a bit too hard in your multis imo, dont let multis dictate the quality of your verse, its dope to have but its just an element or part of the whole verse, and punches personals wins battles imo, you had some really forced multis that sounded awkward ex...

my SICK-SCRIPTS-FLIP the BRITS-SHIT-QUICK, so u wanted the future THIS-IS-HIS
but whats he gonna do, when his raps are uglier then the BITCH-IN-KIDS SIG-PIC-IS

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^wtf , is bitch in kids, sig pic is? reads extremely awkward, and its even more dissapointing because this is a 3 syllable multi,and forced.....i can understand if it was a 7 to nine syllable multi but 3 is very elemetary stuff imo....

not a good battle imo,, future, had the better concept flips, in no doubt and charged for drinks which is a way played punch reference

mvgt future

lol this was easy to judge
since i didnt try to punch hahahaha

Good luck on your next battle future

YEah i'd have to agree.

Future just had the better verse. He Had punches that were hitting, flow and multies that matched lol ... i think you get the picture

Punches: Future
Flow: Future
Nameplay/wordplay: Future

Overall: Future


Deevious1 keep at it mah man...you will be beating cats here in NOTIME.

straight cats future. respect to dv1 for not no showing tho..



an just for the record i actually liked the bitch in kids sig pic line...

Future wins Ko.

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