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Don't no show me and bring somethin' decent

GL

Treat IllestLyrics like 'New Jack City' so you know I gotta 'Jack Da Rippa'
Watch how I 'make change' outta this dude, You don't 'follow me' already? Son, this ain't 'Twitter'

I got killers that say, Like an AK, am a hot spitter that'll shoot'cha
Your pre-written compositions get you fucked, like positions in the kama-sutra

Jack and Jill went up the hill...You already know that he fell down
So how can Jack be the punchline 'king', with a broken crown?

Come on man, I got this cat 'on the ropes', like 'Cassius Clay', look at him 'shake'
Yeah am a rookie, perform a 'rope-a-dope', Jack's KO'd before the referee calls break

You must be punch drunk, from the lines I be spittin', I ain't quittin'
Jack's I be Rippin', hard hittin'-punchlines thats never missin'

I keep it with the season, play trick or treat with this dude
If the treat was that I let him live, then the trick is how I murdered this fool...

lol c'mon son. W/e

Look...

I don't need harsher words to leave parts dispursed, It's hard to go a Leg Up when ya Knee Starts to Jerk
A re-tarded verse don't seem hard to murk, when I gladly Knock Off Tee's like a Flea Market Shirt

You gon' see, bars that hurt from tha stabs that stream thru ya back and spleen till ya caught wit a jab that leans
It's not my fault you had a dream, but I don't bother Readin' L cos I never Bought the Magazine

Imma Off this fag wit ease, Jack's a beast, you ahead of ya self so it's too late to punch above me
Even ya face is fuckin' ugly, a Pest and I aint the only one L Annoys, and not tha State Above Kentucky

And stories, ya tellin' those, never felt ya flows, so I'm A Dressing Each One the Same like a pair of Felon Clothes
Ya whole style got people yellin' no's, and fuck rap, only Lesbian's wit TVs has got to witness L in Shows

When I display the might of angry fist, I'm rapin' kidd, leave ya eyes spread out, have a face like an Asian Bitch
You shoulda neva aim to write when ya faced wit Rip, and juss decide to Pull Ya hands Back like the Day Light Savins shit

This aint right, he's plainly whipped, crazed wit myths, this dude slayed wit a spit
Heads over Tails like loose change in a flip, the only chance it's Time for T is maybe in the U.K. where you live.

Okay so....

Ljt... your verse felt very self hype Ish and alot of your bars didn't rhyme... u didn't throw any real punches and the ones u did just came off as real forced...

Jack... good original punches that hit hard good name play... I was really feeling the l annoys line....

Jack obviously gets my vote cat sweep.... and LJT some advice... in a battle go at ur opposition don't just write like ur in a cypher...

Catsweep Jack

Punches: Jack
Flow: Jack
Creativiness: Jack
Everything else: JAck


LJT take no hate ma dude, but take Enlightened's advice. it will help you in the future.


Vote: Jack

straight cats jack i voted on this last night but my pc crashed if you want me to go into more depth i will but seriously jdr won anyway.

JDR shutout LJT, my opinion

All categories go to JDR, i really don't see any explanation needed
but if it's needed

LJT concetrated more on gassing himself, had like one punch in all of his bars
while Jack just slaughtered him...

vote
Jack Da Rippa

Appreciate everybody voting

Thx for battlin' LJT

3-0 Close it.

Freepost...

Obviously JDR took it, but I thought that jack and Jill bar was creative...just could've been worded differently to make it a harder punch...

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Jack wins KO