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AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*
Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2011 8:00 am
by ahmedkerim
Intro, Hooks, 2 Verses (32 Bars), Outro.
Deadline = 48 hours after topic and beat are decided.
Topic :
leeroi green wrote:"You plan revenge to murder maybe and suddenly you have forever lost your chance"
May The Best Man Win.
Check Ins after the topic and beat are decided.
Good Music. 1ne.
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/88sky ... 24610.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/leero ... 24474.html
Instrumental :
leeroi green wrote: Drake - On One
http://jjtheprodigy.posterous.com/drake ... l-download <bottom of this page before the comments
Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*
Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2011 8:32 pm
by Mic S
check
Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*
Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2011 8:53 pm
by ahmedkerim
check.
*EDIT*
I'll post up in a few hours, I'm having technical difficulties.
Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*
Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 6:02 am
by Mic S
yeah ill post up tonight as well then
Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*
Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 6:11 am
by ahmedkerim
[soundcloud]
http://soundcloud.com/user2707691/skrip ... icstopical[/soundcloud]
If anyone needs the lyrics, I'll post em up...
oh, and i twisted the topic up a bit so instead of murdering someone literally, i went the lyrical battle gone bad route... just a little heads up...
Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*
Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 1:06 pm
by Mic S
Mic S - You plan revenge to murder maybe and suddenly you have forever lost your chance
I also dont like using other peoples flows on their beat...
here it goes VOTE UP!
Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*
Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 5:48 pm
by TreTru
i like the fact ya'll used the same beat...helps determine who's better flowise lyrically and so forth..not my fave beat tho ...but ya'll did it proper soo..
Ahmed...
Dude im impressed really bruh..i liked it lyrically ..
ya mixxing is nice too....of course using dreezy's Hook definately hurt the creativity
end...
Mic S...
i thought you came correct on this..flo was on point ..scheme was coo and mixxing was pleasent enuff..you stuk to the Topic waay better without lettin it get cheezy so Props for that ..
so if im doin Cats id say
Flo- Mic S..ahmed did good but fell off on the flo jus a lil bit..
Deliv-tie..Ahmed wouldve took this imo but he fell off jus a bit closer to the end..
Mic Presence-Ahmed..by a hair..both ya'll sound confident tho..
Creativity-Mic S came more creativewith his flo and Rhymscheme
Consistency-Mic S stayed on Topic the whole time
MVGT-Mic S
Good tracks on this battle imo ya'll both got decent quality and good delivery so it was enjoyable to listen too..
Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*
Posted: Mon Oct 31, 2011 6:27 pm
by thadevious1
Flow - Mic S .. his flow was more consistent
delivery - for me Mic S also had it.. at the end of ahmed's track i couldnt make out what he was sayin
(Mic S his mix down was a bit better)
Mic Pressence - tie i liked both tracks, but it's hard to judge this
seeing you had such different styles
Creativity - this for me is also a tie... you both had a lot of energy and it's hard to judge when you listen to both tracks...
Consistancy - Mic S.. he stayed on topic..
vote =
Mic S
Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*
Posted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 4:57 am
by Mic S
appreciate feed from both
2-0
Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*
Posted: Wed Dec 07, 2011 1:52 am
by Alvin
Its nice to see Mic S progress as much as he has in so little time. YOu did good man, sorry this has been slept on. The same goes for you Ahmed, nice suprise in you.
All in all, i liked both, but as a topical, I have to give this to Mic S as well. Anyother track, it might have gone diferently, but topicals are about slaying the topic.
+1 Mic S