AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*

Call out that obnoxious prick to the ultimate battle. Take your rap beef to the next level. Do it all on the mic, and for the sake of the rest of us, keep it lyrical.

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AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*

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Intro, Hooks, 2 Verses (32 Bars), Outro.
Deadline = 48 hours after topic and beat are decided.

Topic :
leeroi green wrote:"You plan revenge to murder maybe and suddenly you have forever lost your chance"
May The Best Man Win.
Check Ins after the topic and beat are decided.

Good Music. 1ne.
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/88sky ... 24610.html

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/leero ... 24474.html

Instrumental :
leeroi green wrote: Drake - On One
http://jjtheprodigy.posterous.com/drake ... l-download <bottom of this page before the comments
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Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*

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check
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check.

*EDIT*
I'll post up in a few hours, I'm having technical difficulties.
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Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*

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yeah ill post up tonight as well then
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Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*

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[soundcloud][/soundcloud]



If anyone needs the lyrics, I'll post em up...

oh, and i twisted the topic up a bit so instead of murdering someone literally, i went the lyrical battle gone bad route... just a little heads up... :)
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Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*

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Mic S - You plan revenge to murder maybe and suddenly you have forever lost your chance

I also dont like using other peoples flows on their beat...
here it goes VOTE UP!
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Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*

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i like the fact ya'll used the same beat...helps determine who's better flowise lyrically and so forth..not my fave beat tho ...but ya'll did it proper soo..


Ahmed...
Dude im impressed really bruh..i liked it lyrically ..
ya mixxing is nice too....of course using dreezy's Hook definately hurt the creativity
end...


Mic S...
i thought you came correct on this..flo was on point ..scheme was coo and mixxing was pleasent enuff..you stuk to the Topic waay better without lettin it get cheezy so Props for that ..


so if im doin Cats id say

Flo- Mic S..ahmed did good but fell off on the flo jus a lil bit..
Deliv-tie..Ahmed wouldve took this imo but he fell off jus a bit closer to the end..
Mic Presence-Ahmed..by a hair..both ya'll sound confident tho..
Creativity-Mic S came more creativewith his flo and Rhymscheme
Consistency-Mic S stayed on Topic the whole time

MVGT-Mic S
Good tracks on this battle imo ya'll both got decent quality and good delivery so it was enjoyable to listen too..
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Flow - Mic S .. his flow was more consistent
delivery - for me Mic S also had it.. at the end of ahmed's track i couldnt make out what he was sayin :( (Mic S his mix down was a bit better)
Mic Pressence - tie i liked both tracks, but it's hard to judge this
seeing you had such different styles
Creativity - this for me is also a tie... you both had a lot of energy and it's hard to judge when you listen to both tracks...
Consistancy - Mic S.. he stayed on topic..


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Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*

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appreciate feed from both
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Re: AhmedKerim VS Mic S (Audio Topical) *Topic Needed*

Post by Alvin »

Its nice to see Mic S progress as much as he has in so little time. YOu did good man, sorry this has been slept on. The same goes for you Ahmed, nice suprise in you.

All in all, i liked both, but as a topical, I have to give this to Mic S as well. Anyother track, it might have gone diferently, but topicals are about slaying the topic.

+1 Mic S
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