MIC S
bury his doom, like king tuts tomb leave em personally strewn
Urgently soon, cuz imma end E.R like life in an emergency room
ok so this would be better if his name was two words that started with e and r or even EndeR but as is not that great... im not a big fan of picking letter out of peoples names to flip also... STREWN means to scatter something about so u would have to strewn something over him to make sense of that... also bury his doom sound weird so 1/5
burdens eat dude, if hes my contender i'll FLIP "ender(s)" and RETURN TO "(s)ender"
to ya mothers womb, cuz this "dick is pussy", "SWITCHING GENDERS", call him "SEX offender" (think) haha
this was ok again with the switch around the "name"play anyways... could have been worded better but as is 3/5
quick to end(hers), cuz "Enders will end" like RUSSIAN ROULETTE with a "bullet to the head"
cuz he comin about as hard as mullets on a head nd ill pull that mullet til i "RIP" off the "end"
(R.I.P end)
eh this didnt connect at all to me... the real simple rhyme scheme in this bar also 1/5
then ill toss the "ERS" with the durrs like he a special olympic winner, a retarded sprinter
and he running for the finish line, droolin throwin gang signs... (lol) thats a real ender (haha)
these lines didnt rhyme well to me at all... also punch was real simple... 2/5
overall 7/20
Enders
The heart of a bitch under Mic's MANTITS is the reason for Mic diS ad-VANTAGE/
If you Aren’t Ready to be a Marine Yet then you ARE'NT ready for how I MICro-MANAGE//
(He’s ARMY)
this line was ok not a real hard punch but it connected name flip was pretty simple... 3/5
Mic S : 54 likes, well, LIKE... 54 filthy horrs lies don’t make you POP-U-L(i)AR MICHAEL/
cuz your shitty chors & clearly poor lyrical scores make me want to Clot Ur Jug-u-lar… MICHAEL//
(Mic S FB has 54 likes, his name is Michael. Michael Meyers is a murderer… he slices throats, blood clots)
This was eh to me it could have been worded better maybe put MEYERS in the actual bar someplace, word play was a bit of a stretch 1/5
9 -7 : mediocre, like your MIC PRESENCE , big ass glasses doesn’t distract us from your DIKE RESEMBLANCE/
Upon FIGHT ENTRANCE! his MIGHT SEMBLANCE was sliced with a WIFES VENGANCE <- L. Bobit KNIFE REFRENCE!!//
(9-7 = battle record, Lorena Bobbit chopped off her husbands penis and threw it out a window.)
i like how you explained ur bar in the bar itself not really a full punch here though maybe would have been better if the lines were flipped 2/5
I’m surgical and precise, hurtin foes on the mic, dishin burials on the site, and tonight? its OPEN MIC NIGHT!!/
He’s hopin I might strike, but after he swings you’ll see, my names the only Great thing this HOPELESS GUY WRITES!!!
now i was feeling this bar the most out the battle... both lines had a good punch second one was a lil generic but it hit and the first line had a nice name flip and the surgical setup complemented it well... 4/5
overall 10/20
so mvgt ENDERS overall he just had a more complete battle verse
