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i'll eat a rapper an be a factor faster than you can read the chapter
you see disasters i see benefactors to shatter cuz I've been a master
ill bend attackers to my will and drop wit heat to prove I'm ill
with proof in skills to move the hill i cruise in booths like coupe devilles
i shoot ta kill like a snipers pull, twice as hot as a lighters glow
i write ta mold the young and old with heat you seek when the night is cold
I'm twice as bold with stored energy dropping def like a wars infantry
the cores MVP, pens and swords envy me so I'm prone to gore enemies
a born identity never forgotten with raps that are clever and awesome
i measure my problems and sever the odd ends ill an forever a goblin
as i weather the rotten and come out clean but always some doubt me
cause i come proudly as words run out me bright when the suns cloudly
I'm the one mounting a new attack the one on it with the truest raps
with intrusive facts ta leave ya blue an black while ya act like you new ta that
the proven mack on one once again crews intense to confront ya men
I'm blunt with pens scribbling tons of blends Pain? shit I'm numb to dents
i punch the fence and knock boundaries harden core like a steel foundry
every ounce of me will bounce ta beats as i clap my hands an bounce my feet
renowned for frees while fly like a breeze opponents try but they freeze
while i keep my eyes on the seas deny who i be and you can die on ya feet
pry an find beef full of testosterone coming from the best to offer flows
test on this pro and get flesh ripped off its bones as i test all obstacles

i write ta mold the young and old with heat you seek when the night is cold

^Favourite line.

Not bad man, multis and flow were dope as usual but the content was nothing special. I've seen better from you because this drop minus the multis would basically just be a giant ramble. I know you're capable of delivering witty and thought provoking lines etc but in this I just didn't see any. Tight multis and flow but an average drop altogether.

that exactly what was intended it was a key style no real thought put into it

Yeah, bruh. Was deffo tight for what it was. I do these alot too. Lol. I got some quotes right here that snapped:

ill bend attackers to my will and drop wit heat to prove I'm ill
with proof in skills to move the hill i cruise in booths like coupe devilles
i shoot ta kill like a snipers pull, twice as hot as a lighters glow
i write ta mold the young and old with heat you seek when the night is cold

Some pretty cold lines right here, man. The flow is impeccable.

I'm the one mounting a new attack the one on it with the truest raps
with intrusive facts ta leave ya blue an black while ya act like you new ta that
the proven mack on one once again crews intense to confront ya men
I'm blunt with pens scribbling tons of blends Pain? shit I'm numb to dents

Cold shit, homie. Especially the second bar. I'm diggin that 'numb to dents' line.

renowned for frees while fly like a breeze opponents try but they freeze
while i keep my eyes on the seas deny who i be and you can die on ya feet
pry an find beef full of testosterone coming from the best to offer flows
test on this pro and get flesh ripped off its bones as i test all obstacles

Not much direction here in these two bars, but the flow and the scheme going is pretty tight. Overall, this was a pretty damn solid key verse. Keep em comin, bruh.

i think it was nice
not a real storyline in it
but you had some good punches
and metha's i'm liking this

I like this a lot better than ya last drop i gave you feed for.. keep it up