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sHOE CASE

Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 12:03 pm
by Kuhlerblynd
I'll withstand the cold and the fog, on my back is where those boulders are lodged
Weight would most likely fold you in dawg, damn good thing my shoulders are broad
I'm open, you're not! I've been through Hell and back, background in e-mail or fax!
I call bullshit if you trying to sell ya crap, I'm the fucking MAN, SON! Helter Skelter THAT!
So fuckin hot, I'll melt your ash! Raincoat for the storm? Are you even known to use rubbers?
Don't be mad if I've stolen your thunder, you've could've been real and fucking shown your true colors!
Go use the lube, fucker! Dumb bitch, like someone would have to bang you for you to grab your ankles!
And I dont have to hate you to madly shake you until the Lord comes and gladly takes you!
Shit, really I'm happy, grateful! You only showed me you want to be fucking lonely
Something told me the shit you spit was fucking phony, and I'm not talking about when you'd suck and blow me!
You got life by the balls? Those are my nuts you're holding! Go lie to someone else's stomach!
Should be easy with everyone else you're fuckin! Why hasn't you're crazy ass seeked help or something?
You'd have an eternal sentence if you went to jail for bluffin! Ganged raped as soon as you walk in prison gates
They wondering how much dick she takes! Shit, I would be more worried about all the dicks she's ate!
Probably die from a twisted shank in your back! Foreshadow? Shit, you picked your battle!
If you know the distance a whore travels you'd end up some shit's creek without your paddle!
Near some fucking farm with deformed cattle! But now I'm holdin the beef against this hoe of the week
You're revoked and relieved, FUCK I can't believe you still have fucking chosen to breathe!

Re: sHOE CASE

Posted: Sun Oct 23, 2011 12:23 pm
by TreTru
this was pretty nice bruh...i liked the manson line
Flo and scheme was on...some other cool lines ..
but this seemed like a keystyle as compared to your usual werk...still a great read tho imo...

Re: sHOE CASE

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 5:30 am
by Kuhlerblynd
This was completely keystyled actually lol. Good call.

Hoping for more feed.

Re: sHOE CASE

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 7:15 am
by MonuMental
I feel ya on the keystyle bit, bruh. I just dropped something similar to this. Multies went ham consistently. Needless to say, this was a nice display of your usual skills, so respect, bruh.

Re: sHOE CASE

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 1:14 pm
by Haz
I'll withstand the cold and the fog, on my back is where those boulders are lodged
Weight would most likely fold you in dawg, damn good thing my shoulders are broad

nice opener , came in swinging



Shit, really I'm happy, grateful! You only showed me you want to be fucking lonely
Something told me the shit you spit was fucking phony, and I'm not talking about when you'd suck and blow me!

agressive, straight to the point, good attack good bar




Should be easy with everyone else you're fuckin! Why hasn't you're crazy ass seeked help or something?

lmao tough,


overall cool piece

Re: sHOE CASE

Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2011 1:20 pm
by Kuhlerblynd
Wow, thanks alot for the feed guys! I'm trying to bring some real HOF material with each post now... That's my goal. I'm hoping I'll be able to achieve this!