Hip Hop Forum

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_NSmMRnnF_s
This song is a few years old but it's way beeter than my release in the tourney so check it out. BTW i don't have a soundclick so that's why it's a youtube link.

hmmm.. couple yeard old eh? i duno, it has a lot of potential, lows on, never really off. some parts sound awkward, as if you forgot the lyrics for a second or summn.
i duno.. i think its cool. lyrics are some average stuff ya know? although, some of the lines were pretty nice, so there is definitely quotables. hook was kinda an issue for me, its just soooo monotone n boring, ya know? ya needa have more confidence in the singing and make it stand out more, woulda made it better.. and come ad libz with effects woulda made it nicer as well.
over-all, cool track.

beat starts loud then softens up ...
im feelin the flo ya rockin ..its on for the most part..
maybe just turn down one of those main tracks..so it meshes better..

Hook is pretty good bruh..

yeah this is aight ..keep doin you bruh...and it is better than your tourney track...

Holla @ Jah boy..