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just a lil song i put together for the audio tourney

oh yeah i won with it

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tell me what you think of it.. feeds always appreciated

DOPE!!! dope this dude, beat is cool an helps you to flow smoothly lyrics are dope and felt

hate to be critical but your portrayin your love for music but it seems like your delivery is too forceful no homo but you could have spoken an pronounced a few words a lot gentler lol
also the hook was the worst part of this dope track in my opinion. betterthan anythin i could ever do tho great drop...

dope track my guy. i was feeling the hook. delivery was nice although the mic presence i felt you were comfortable for the most part just a few words seemed either forced/slipped-- but nothing major, nd u picked it back up afterwords everytime.. Good track tho, u picked a known beat but u did your own thing with it..so on that note, good track

thanks for the feed guys upping this beast

this was aight ...you i mean it was good enuff to get my vote..

presence has improved..delivs better quality too..

wasnt my favorite hook but it was bearable...

but fuk it all bro... way to step it up.... period..