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pop in a mix tape and kick great rhymes at a sick rate
im sick in sixty six states with 16 added to dictate
which place i stay as my lip ate these dip shits plates
i shift face and conquer, bonkers like tylers yonkers
a monster i'll haunt cha droppin bombs like bombers
sometimes I'm basic tell i take it past imagining
I'm fastly damaging and ravaging leaving ravaged scenes
damage me? nah not possible i hop over every obstacle
unstoppable when tossing flows really I'm a boss in role
stop and go? nah not known i keep it real halfway cynical
i've been this dope and been before sick I'm fucking clinical
at the pinnacle at winning so.. I'm hitting goals an ripping pros
sitting prone with a drifting scope pointed at my enemies
as i endlessly send this heat with lyrics on an endless sheet
my blends is deep call um deep sea haters can't see me
they be weak while I'm 3 sheets to the wind in the beats heat
so tell me if you smell me cause this shit is ill
i rip an spill if its real grab the mic and spit at will
i could lift a hill above the ground with sounds that so profound
so tell me now are you down as the king is proud to accept his crown



lol just a key

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pop in a mix tape and kick great rhymes at a sick rate
im sick in sixty six states with 16 added to dictate


damn this shit sounded illl .... sort of like an eminem styled bar

sometimes I'm basic tell i take it past imagining
I'm fastly damaging and ravaging leaving ravaged scenes
damage me? nah not possible i hop over every obstacle
unstoppable when tossing flows really I'm a boss in role


liked that too ... but not as much as that first bar!!! Damn kid!



Great read mah dude!

^^agree with quix on that open...it was "wick wickity slick splickety spits" ahaha dope shit bro

thanks guys upping

I was feeling the flow big time... first bar set the pace but i think the whole thing good... a lil basic but the flow kept it sick so... keep up

BUMP

yeah i liked the first bar but you fell off you should prewrite monster haymakers and throw em in the middle of peices like these to keep the readers attention... It was like yay multis than it just got repetitive with no standout punches