K KiLLaH vs Comeback Kid (K Killah wins KO)

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K KiLLaH
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K KiLLaH vs Comeback Kid (K Killah wins KO)

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Lip gloss poppa!!.. I Rip soft proctas
KID you couldn't COMEBACK with a rick ross docta!!
How you gon play KiLLaH with ya ripped off roster?
I'll hit em with MORE FIRE than a PISSED OFF RASTAH!!
...I'll mop ya drop ya.....crack ya wig
He aint safe Jesus wouldn't COMEBACK FOR KID!!
Dis nigga wouldn't pop shit with a laxative
I heard his boyfriend stay COMING on his BACK with KIDS!!
UNH!!
Now RUN YA WALLET where the big ones at?
I got child support shook ta get KIDS inCOMEBACK!!
You wanna rap? Ill putcha body on wax
Hit this nigga with a train n leave him BODIED ON TRACKS!!
Ya prolly on crack and be snorting blow
Ta think ya COME'n BACK KID... ta my abortion flows
I would gladly sonne KID but I ignore these hoes
I seen his momma run a marathon...ON MAURY's SHOW!!

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Re: K KiLLaH vs Comeback Kid

Post by CBK »

piece of mind, beating mine? nah you the weaker kind
smack this plastic actor,he just keeps repeating lines,
seek to find one that he designed, an your mission will be denied.
so use the same nameplays, that every mayne says,
your nameplays from the cave days are always the same.lame dead
shame ya have to strain your brain in vain to maintain
the same plays that theyv'e said.
i'll bite your style its crunch rhyme,thinking up a punchline,
something something something, beat this Kid up at lunchtime.
your skill is minimal, bitch get original,your not a K killah just a gay criminal with lame syllables,an your words badly poor,
i gurantee your unoriginality, you drop a sick one and.... i've heard that before.
so k killah, hate spiller, go drink paint thinner
i'm the icing on the top of your spongey half baked cake filler.
you aint killing today,unless your willing to pay
a villain a day or give a million away
simply put your name aint killin this k. (kid)

-- Sun Oct 16, 2011 1:32 am --
Last edited by CBK on Wed Oct 19, 2011 3:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Dope verse cbk much respect for posting on time
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Re: K KiLLaH vs Comeback Kid

Post by MOEstradamus »

cat sweep to killah

flow was better punches where better and name play was good

cbk your name play was weak your punches werent really there at all and your set up is kinda wierd i think you need to check on switching up the rhyme scheme a bit cuz your style isnt working...
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Re: K KiLLaH vs Comeback Kid

Post by leeroi green »

Hated it I give these titties two thumbs down

Cbk you do know what catts are right well try to hit ech cat like twice or better so couple personals some relevant punches and nameflips creative wordplay ya flow is meh your use of multies ate cool but could be much stronger but well .........
.......MVGT.......K

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Post by 88SkyLink »

Well, this stuff was mediocre at best IMO. I'd give all the cats to K Killah, but I know this isn't the best from K, whereas for CBK, you need to step up quick cuz u can't keep losing like this
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K Killah wins KO
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