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Lonely At The Top (Above The Influence)

Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 6:23 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
I wish I could rip out the herbal,
Since I was kicked out the circle,

Cause it surrounded lines of coke,
I Lost my friends behind the smoke,
When we chill it's time for dope,
I've yet to find a sign of hope,
I try to write my rhymes to cope,
But even so,.. my mind is choked,

I can't deny my life was ruined by drugs,
They're so potent I was losing my love,
But what did she know, clueless she puffed,
Just with her, I figured two was enough,
By now I should really be used to this stuff,
But I'm not, cause I'm so stupid and UGH!

They keep popping back up like the pills in the cabinet,
I swear each one I meet has like a million habits,
They seem to keep on filling their bags with,
Crushed up dirt-like vermilion tablets,
Hope you're spilling your pallets,
I pray It's me who's grilling your casket,
When you overdose while still in the mattress,
Stole and lied to death, now I'm building the ashes,
Cold-blooded snakes, so I'll always hate reptilian faggots,










Just a quick key to clear the rust

Re: Lonely At The Top (Above The Influence)

Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 6:42 pm
by Borat
Clean.

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Re: Lonely At The Top (Above The Influence)

Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 11:00 pm
by Future
this was cool for a key but it read more as a poem to me idk why could be the bar length

Re: Lonely At The Top (Above The Influence)

Posted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 11:30 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
i consider most of my recent work poetry but i don't think the poets on this site would agree with me

Re: Lonely At The Top (Above The Influence)

Posted: Sun Oct 16, 2011 1:26 pm
by COMPUTERCHIPS
Dope flow for a key. No rust noticed by me..I'd like to see more. I could relate to this situation, i feel what your saying. Thanks for dropping

PeaCE