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House rules look good
4 Bars, due in 72hrs
Oh and this is my check

-- Sat Oct 15, 2011 1:00 am --

YOU WANTED ME TO WRITE! WHERE U AT KID



hit till KID-IS-ERASED an there ISN'T-A-TRACE i 'run the track' an u cant FINISH-A-RACE//
first i eat this youngin and then i SPIT-IN-HIS-FACE see kid that's how CLITORIS-TASTE!

my flow's 'nuts' and 'cum backs' 'SOUND-IS-STERILE' IL may have though they 'FOUND-A-HERO'//
Till they SEEN-DA-COWARDS grind is like 'the FREEDOM-TOWERS' cus u've 'GROUND-ZERO'(check his wins)

in fact u couldn't STINK-LESS, u been here since SPRING-AND still haven't done a THING-YET!!//
so i dont care what u THINK-WHEN-DOG u couldn't come SWINGING-HARD on a fuckin SWING-SET(he was talking shit in the shout)

so now i DROP-THIS-JOKE "comeback lord" thats never GOT-A-VOTE, wow!! im WRECKING-YA-DUDE//
and once again come....back....kid....wont....win.... sorry im all about STRETCHING-DA-TRUTH

(I know absolutely fuck all about this cat.)


Imminent means gonna happen,Future, is what might do
like your future's defenitely gonna be bright dude?
you should abbreviate the letters because IF? is more like you

Imminent lol this polynomial is impotent,probably wanks over shoots in filament,
i would have came harder but couldn't find no info on his roots, (routes)discriminant.

he's insignificant,equivalent to incipients,equipped with ridiculous deliverance,recipients receive vigorous spits,meticulously writ, best beg forgiveness quick because only death is Imminent you bitch.

now ive heard talk of herbivores before but this freak takes the piss,
he'd probably go into anaphylactic shock from the taste of a beef flavoured crisp,an their my favourite,
you didnt steal the W,your lack of experience here gave you it
i know nothing about this unknown to me he's a john doe
but pronto, one blow
will leave him feeling he's been hit by combos from John bones.

Vote:IF.....barely.... he knows how to make punchlines thats why

I have to go with a catsweep to IF.

He had better strucure, and better punches. Not very many personals but a couple used nameplays but a pretty solid verse.

Cbk i see u worked on ur structure which was nice, but maybe a lil more work. I also recommend maybe using a more reader freindly vocab. You alson went on a couple multi sprees which really had nothing to do with ur opponent. You have great multi's, now figure out a way to use em in a more effective way. This is an improvement tho man.

Mvgt IF

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Vote Imminent.

he was actually throughing punches...nothing amazing but still out hit CBK's verse. IMM had better flow, multies and structure too.


MVGT: Imminent

tko imminenet close an update.

Thread closed and records updated.


Future wins KO.