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heres mine uppin for vote

ok. might be my speakers but both of your tracks sounded off quality wise. well, from what ive heard from yall on other tracks. but, i wont use that as a cat.

axel- beat came in dope! awesome choice. you always have a tight delivery, but it didnt seem quite so on this one. i was hoping for somethin tighter from you. tighter as in delivery. a couple little pauses in random places. but all in all, i was still bobbin my head to your rythem. well done man.

def- OF ALL THE FUCKIN BEATS IN THE WORLS YOU HAD TO PICK THIS ONE?!?! my goodness i cant stand the original song but, hearin it start off i was like, "well, def could probably do sumtn different to it." and you did. i dug your flow from the get go. nice pace and nice rhyme schemes also man. hook was better than decent also. dope shit man.

flow- defiance. a lil smoother on the flow.
creativity- axel. simply cus i havent heard his instrumental yet.
consistency- defiance. jus was feelin his all the way through.
style- axel. jus had the more confident approach. jus wish he held down the delivery.
impact-defiance. better track overall i suppose



mvgt: defiance

overall i think defiance did better, lyrically i felt his better, defiance was more laid back which i personally enjoy more, quality wise both were equal in their differences,

i dislike played out beats but still found it smoother than axel's beat, defiance had a smoother flow probably due to the smoother beat, overall i gotta say defiance took this

v/de' fiance

2-0 upping this piece

wow, Defiance wins by a landslide...no hate man. but he came correct. Beat, flow, messege...everything was oon



Vote: D

CHEA KNOCK OUT WOOH!!!

GOod battle Axel

i'll make sure to peep your track when i get home



checked your song man it was tight shit.. chorus could of used some polishing.. and as for quality it was sub par.. but that beat was tight.. and i felt you hit on it well just needed some fine tunning..

good shit, good battle