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House Rules, 4 - 5 bars maximum,due 48 hours after check in,
this is my check in good luck!!

check...why 48 hours..does it take you that long???

ok is 24 hours good, i do like using less hours how about its due before the end of today

From the start you’ll fade out.. from the way I take out this fake clown
And he thinks his gay shits cool!!... sucking cocks only time blakes down
You have the cheek to call me wack.. NO!!.. I just dumb it down like fiasco
Your shit aint tight.. but you aint a pussy or dick… just an ass hole!!
This is suicide going against me!.. you might as well harm yaself
And then make your peace with god… cus you aint got a chance in hell
Ive figured you out.. you think ya something ya not!! sick??.. HARDLY!
He a transvestite!. cus when blake gets dolled up… he looks like barbie
Ya career aint started and your already a has been... this a crash scene
Ya shits fucked and played with.. more than that kid who calls ya dad-deee

you couldn't get Sick with a calorie,enjoy your imprisoned reality
i swing,you lie just like were getting the salary
most of your lyrics prove nothing,to you i control life,move something
in battle,your more screwed than any crews humping
i devoured your hope, i treat ur verses like their a few dumplings
ur trapped,to you this is a beast,you get shit on just like the streets
stay confined in these sorts,you couldn't be sharp if you were three swords
Recess! my resource says ur gonna receive more k.o.'s than our key-boards
you've been brung down,if i didnt drop this verse,it woulda been a dumb bout
a Fag FELON you,its ironic,both of you might never come out

-- Tue Sep 20, 2011 3:34 pm --

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aiight honest opinion this was a lame battle there was little/no multi use an very few inners. punches were ok on both sides. example.

a Fag FELON you,its ironic,both of you might never come out

this is a dope line although it was set up poorly.it uses name references and sort of wordplay with the never come out part.and to be honest i think this was the best line of the entire battle. punches were lacking on both sides an blake attempted punches that i thought didnt even make sense

you couldn't get Sick with a calorie ?what, and...
i swing,you lie just like were getting the salary??? these are senseless.

Felon you also had some mishits,

Ya shits fucked and played with.. more than that kid who calls ya dad-deee
this was your worst line i think.

to vote id say punches/personals=Tie
flow = hard to catch on both = Tie
multis=Tie
structure=Tie


after consultation an being told i can im gonna declare my vote a draw.

seriously this battle was lame ive been hit harder by both of you so i know you can both pack a punch an kill a script but neither of u brought ya A game to this 1. keep posting.respect


(soz for the essay)

yo.

not gonna lie... shit was weak.

felon, this verse was better then our battle. the suckin dick/blakes down was a decent punch. played but decent. but that was the only punch you really had directed towards him. every line/bar needs to be a personal/punch/play on his name. thats what wins is consistancy.

blake, your shit sukked. that name play the last bar was mediocre...


punches/ felon (barely)
personals/ tie
flow/ felon. better structure easier to read
multies/ tie... none too impressive
creativity/ none

vote: felon

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lol

agreed on weakness

multis-none
punches-felon
enjoyment-tie
nameplay-blake
wordplay-tie
flow-felon

vote goes to felon


not even gonna break it down

some good lines but no quotables

Honestly, I was the one who told CBK that he could vote a tie if he felt it was appropriate.

And in this case neither of you came with that much heat...

But if it had to go one way it would be felon, the hits were harder and the flow was a little better...neither were too strong, I've seen you both come a lot harder. But felon edged it out.