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Take me home
Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 3:29 pm
by M33Kish
[soundcloud]
http://soundcloud.com/m33kish/take-me-home-draft[/soundcloud]
Peep and leave feed, I'll return it folks.
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Re: Take me home
Posted: Mon Sep 26, 2011 2:30 pm
by TreTru
well....thats your style?..dass dope bruh..flo was on point ..deliv seemd prett y clear for youer speed, and fit the song so big ups..and please write a whole song and complete your masterpieces....
Re: Take me home
Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2011 12:18 am
by Alvin
OK, so i can tell you are saying dope shit, nice lines and all, but the constant style of delivery makes it a bit boring and easy to tune out. I cant say much on the quality, im at work and speakers suck ass. Thee ONLY thing i can tell from this song and my speakers is you'd benifit a grip from switch ups it style, pause here and there, let my brain soak it up,,, instead of a constant... hate to say this meek, read. You are getting better, starting to remind me of some childish gambino shit, i would just focus time on delivery. What mic you end up going with anyhow?