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House rules like you said..

4-5 bars...lets do this...

-- Mon Sep 19, 2011 11:34 pm --

im checking in.

-- Tue Sep 20, 2011 12:04 am --

This is a no pest zone.. the truth is this bitch’ll be exposed
Cus his rhymes suck…. if he went to prison he’d blow
Don’t be giving me grieve.. I slap bitch’s for a get go
So I punch at ya eyes just to make ya fucking head roll
Its over..your a pest so let go… its time for the ruff ride
Cus ya on ya own.. inhibitions like your love life
I’ll tell you how this shit goes….. this I’ll muscle through
So no wonder most people are wack here… when there just like you

chekk...

i expected more of a challenge. i'll go easy...

Subpurb swipes to this so called criminal, aborted like denied of his birth right/
Swerve wide, and take this felon out for life, like he just caught his 3rd strike/

This dudes a faggot, catch him on his knee's witta O face like he's prayin to some saint/
Cuz thats the only way to up his game on this site, and right now, this 'felons unranked'/ (unranked felonies are minor felonies)

I'll break n rape ya beezy, go ricky bobby, shake n bake, its breezy/(filler)
A felon standin behind the bar's u spit, should make escaping easy/

Potatos, i'll mash you dog, me... Im too hot to throw/
Fukk this cat, like this felon hit the showers just to drop the soap/

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In all honesty, pest won this one i think within his first line. Fel jus came waaaaay to basic on this one.

Cat sweep to pest.

Any problems, let me kno and ill break down

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(grabs broom an dust pan) sweepin lol pest got this the bars from felon were like kindergarten simple

haha thanks but thats crew vote playa. 1-0 still

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i felt like felons verse was way too simple,your getting there,your structure is correct,you could fix up your flow and multies and make them more accurate,also i would like to see stronger more solid punches from felon and some personals and some nameplay/wordplay always helps,pest had some punches,nameplay,punches nothing too personal but he did have personals compared to felon's verse,i think pest had more consistency,and overrall entertainment on this one so
MVGT pest

-- Tue Sep 20, 2011 12:06 am --

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/blake ... 23936.html
this battle really deserves some votes,

As Stated Before Pest Took This Pretty Easy...Felon Your Ryhmes Were Too Simple So Pest Took This With A Cat Sweep


MVGT - Pest

lol...feedback plz...break my shit down..ive never done this internet battle ting before!!!! i can come more complex...just didnt feel i had tooo but i guess i doo...

felon man , you need to come harder switch it up i aint the best an i even i thought yours was whack.

you need to use more complex vocab,harder hitting punches an a better rhyme scheme try using multies an inners to help your longer lines flow more smoothly.also your personal insults are weak try to background check competitors before you drop so you can find out a lil bit of info about them prior to dissing.
no hate, just some friendly advice keep posting dude !


pest took straight cats in my opinion.
mvgt= pest

Felon wrote:lol...feedback plz...break my shit down..ive never done this internet battle ting before!!!! i can come more complex...just didnt feel i had tooo but i guess i doo...

It's not like in a face to face battle with somebody and you can change your facial expressions or say something with a certain tone of voice to add to a line. If you rapped your verse in an actual battle that was face to face your verse would have had much more impact. It has to be more hard and direct online.

Pest wins KO