Persistence
Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2011 9:34 am
Feedback is what im looking for, would appreciate it.
And here we have the return of Hip Hops chosen,
the one who eliminates all those opposing,
the guy who tends keep all opponents frozen,
constantly dodging attacks while getting blows in,
we'll run you guys over slowly with mountain bikes,
you guys are the ones on facebook still begging for likes,
making empty threats that are taken back like sikes,
if they aren't your girls, why are you being gentle with mics?
this is for you information, make note of it,
original, you should a Hip Hop quote of it,
addictive? take a tot of it, don't think that I'm stopping you,
your my enemy, but I'm just focused on topping you,
I'm not like others, I don't go hard on the intro,
or act the industry, leaving you in limbo,
letting them portray you as a used bimbo,
complete darkness couldn't expose your thin glow,
so don't be dumb by dropping albums annually,
endurance will drain from your body gradually,
as I then casually, walk up just to finish you,
once the leader's gone, I watch the crew diminish too,
hard to get up? the last blow's why your meat shakes,
I set flames to your bodies, its my job to eat fakes,
now your skeleton's getting up? yo, for pete's sake,
oh, your just tired of this game, going on your beat break.
Beat used was kick in the door by Biggie.
If you dont know what beat break means, look it up on urban dictionary.
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And here we have the return of Hip Hops chosen,
the one who eliminates all those opposing,
the guy who tends keep all opponents frozen,
constantly dodging attacks while getting blows in,
we'll run you guys over slowly with mountain bikes,
you guys are the ones on facebook still begging for likes,
making empty threats that are taken back like sikes,
if they aren't your girls, why are you being gentle with mics?
this is for you information, make note of it,
original, you should a Hip Hop quote of it,
addictive? take a tot of it, don't think that I'm stopping you,
your my enemy, but I'm just focused on topping you,
I'm not like others, I don't go hard on the intro,
or act the industry, leaving you in limbo,
letting them portray you as a used bimbo,
complete darkness couldn't expose your thin glow,
so don't be dumb by dropping albums annually,
endurance will drain from your body gradually,
as I then casually, walk up just to finish you,
once the leader's gone, I watch the crew diminish too,
hard to get up? the last blow's why your meat shakes,
I set flames to your bodies, its my job to eat fakes,
now your skeleton's getting up? yo, for pete's sake,
oh, your just tired of this game, going on your beat break.
Beat used was kick in the door by Biggie.
If you dont know what beat break means, look it up on urban dictionary.
My reviews of posts:
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/hazy- ... ml#p180996
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/a-ser ... ml#p180997