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PUNCHES... na... i just SHAKE BITCHES

Illest's...

been black, but i illuminate then bring it back with impact, one notion explodin
cause the impact of sick raps is infact where its at, comin with emotions emoted
my bars piercing ya skull cavities i keep pressin then call it insurance of fate
cats is wack ta me dropin dull casually, bull blasphemy, an disturbin this place
haters wieldin there Broken Mics see they might be, na they unlikely ta smite me
remember i enlight these lyrics, then run on um, jog there brain, my style, Nike
then i'm a mark my turf with hits that will easly stop the worst of others spits
love it, leave it, or beat it drop a verse, and quit talkin shit, or suck a dick
now stop da fight, cus bitches i can drop all night till your whole towns soaked
an theres no found hope of anyone here stopping me infact, theres no sound close
in general these bitches, cant even hit this assassin, blastin, tearin an rippin
im always down ta either drop ether hot free shit an then i spear um with disses
wearin ya stiches is eminent your limbs bent an it is just a cough by enlightend
choppen there hype an robbin there life an remind um i drop an it is frightening
its true im sicker then cancer patients with constipation, aids an Ebola viruses
an ur not suvivin it ur dyin quick, so sit an watch as i hold the higher scripts
u admire this as i kick fire spits out my lungs as if my chest rests in fire pit

Very nice, we are the best and it is known.

sick post flowed insanefor the most of it an the multi/inner usage was phenomenal.


"so sit an watch as i hold the higher scripts
u admire this as i kick fire spits out my lungs as if my chest rests in fire pit"

the last couple of bars were my favouite but i think the flow for the last line may have been off compared to the rest id have said

watch it unfold as i upload the higher scripts.... as if my chest resides at depths inside a fire pit. just a suggestion you probably think i should fuck off lol. dope post anyway.

Im not a fan. I usualy like your drops, but this one was mediokre by the bar you've set for yourself. So instead of dickriding and saying "nice drop, blah blah blah, i love you, blah blah blah" ill tell you what i didnt like to help you improve in my perspective.

You display nice rhyme schemes, but your crossovers are a bit sloppy, for example:

then i'm a mark my turf with hits that will easly stop the worst of others spits
love it, leave it, or beat it drop a verse, and quit talkin shit, or suck a dick
now stop da fight, cus bitches i can drop all night till your whole towns soaked
an theres no found hope of anyone here stopping me infact, theres no sound close

The red is obviously what I'm talking about, and it read terrible imo, sure some inner rhymes, but just sloppy i guess.


Another thing is the needless rhymes that took me no where, like your opener:

been black, but i illuminate then bring it back with impact, one notion explodin
cause the impact of sick raps is infact where its at, comin with emotions emoted

So illest is dark, and you illuminate, with raps.... that have an impact, with emotions, and the end. Erno man, seems like a lot of rhyming to not say a whole lot other than you can rhyme.

Other than that for complaints, i wont ride the dead mule, peace the shit out lol.

it was meant as a bit of a written diss some subliminal shots i guess.... no real deep punches or wordplay... lol and thanks for the feed.... keep it coming