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let me take you on a journey



enter my mind..

thoughts travel at the speed of light
my imagination gives me wings for flight
ideas manifest into the seeds of life
cuttin rhymes with out a need of knives
i talk myself up and believe the hype
my mental is suspensful a free delight
thinking is measured by my thoughts inside
i keep it real as the fake is tossed aside
at times it gets twisted til the knots untied
i reflect on past times i could of lost my life
and smile for a while and jus rock the ride
keep it moving happy just to monopolize
on the things that i hold dear to me
an the bad things that i alwayz fear to be
my life is a mess the path isnt clear to me
sometimes i feel mute with no one hearin me
but still i speak knowing this is what i have
hip hop thoughts breach an its such a blast
i was a bad person but man fuck the past
looking foward to the future as i touch the grass
sometimes my minds racing with no breaks to hit
sometimes i feel down like i cant take this shit
but i always look up giving thanks for it
cause even when im down i know i make it shift
my mind is mine and no one else controls me
thats why i take life as its just unfold-ing
a mental juggernaut not a soul can hold me
thats why im smiling thanking those before me

dope. simple but effective rhyme scheme, flawless flow thru out ,no real subject/topic but it was just good quality self expression. Good post man

This was nice...it cuts to the chase pretty nicely..the vibe is smooooooth
and the lyrics flow together nicely..I'm digging all you did on this
I woulda liked to see a more indepth analysis though...on ur thoughts that is
either way keep up the good work my dude

As Q Said Would Of Been Nice To See An In Depth View On This But It Wa A Nice Drop None The Less

I think this post flowed very well, though the post doesnt have a specific subject. Still dope though.

thoughts travel at the speed of light
my imagination gives me wings for flight
ideas manifest into the seeds of life
cuttin rhymes with out a need of knives

Good Opener, Flows well..

i was a bad person but man fuck the past
looking foward to the future as i touch the grass

Hard..

Nice verse...solid..your lyrics are deep!! are you writing bars to record or just letting ya mind go for idea's????

more or less i just write to write