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Rhythm Fanatic

Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 4:53 pm
by Defiance
ima rhyme manufacturer spectacular with my venacular
exact with words as i craft a verse to attack ya nerves
the wack have heard of the fanatical rhyme animal
past whats tangable make it magical when the hammer rolls
i stammer those with glamour flows my raps wrote in scowler
a flowin scholar with growin dollars sick im choking doctors
on throne i prosper cause im ritechous with the right stuff
i write love into the sight of those who have a slight lust
and i might just strike with a vengence to end it
im tempted to blend it with a tremendous offensive
horendous to senses im too ill to conceal the real
i wheel and deal and seal the deal disbelievers can feel the steel
heels will peel when they running away aint it funny to say
what ive done in a day to stun an dismay the sun and its rays
like we one and the same but so different with mo victims
my flows mystic im so mythic even pros will show symtoms
its no gimmick i rip it with painted pictures of tainted figures
im playing quicker and stayin fitter you can take ya pictures

Re: Rhythm Fanatic

Posted: Wed Sep 14, 2011 9:14 pm
by CBK
the multi usage was insane dude dope rhyme scheme an almost perfect flow... ive seen your verse for the seven sins that was exquisite. your one talented motherfucker....

Re: Rhythm Fanatic

Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 1:12 am
by MonuMental
I would make a joke about the wreck knocking something loose, but you're ripping just as hard as you ever have, on your own accord. Tight shit, Def.
ima rhyme manufacturer spectacular with my venacular
exact with words as i craft a verse to attack ya nerves
the wack have heard of the fanatical rhyme animal
past whats tangable make it magical when the hammer rolls
Pretty sick lil opener, imo. Flow was deffo on point and multies were cool, as well.
horendous to senses im too ill to conceal the real
i wheel and deal and seal the deal disbelievers can feel the steel
heels will peel when they running away aint it funny to say
what ive done in a day to stun an dismay the sun and its rays
Dopeness.

Re: Rhythm Fanatic

Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2011 4:06 am
by Defiance
thanks fellas uppin this