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Aight... First time collab between me and 3rd, so we figured this is how we would bring it to the table...


Kuhlerblynd-
Leave emcees collapsed of course, we attack with force
Ya'll simply gassed for sure as we pass the torch
Blowing up tracks and more, derail ya train of thought
Celebrities with the fame on lock, we remain on top
Even our pages caught fire cuz our words are flaming hot
Not about to change the plot, we still conquering masses
Sodom's history becomes a mystery after bombin you faggots
Ya'll take tactics often so drastic that Bin Ladin is laughing
You prefer paper or plastic? See how the coffin or bag fits
Beatin us is not gonna happen, you soft as a mattress
Better off as an actress, or out talkin to classes
Teaching kids who show asses our punches are causin backflips
Ambulance ready to haul in you bastards to intensive care
There's never been a pair of fists compared to the shit we bare
These pistons flare, and swing so quick they rip the air
So much fuckin food for thought, you grabbed the kitchen chair
Who says any mission's fair? This is Gods versus humans
These bombs hit in union, shred apart any movement
They're constant and fluid until you rock to the music
Battling us? You shouldnt choose it, you'll honestly lose, bitch
We bare arms that'll shoot shit to knock off ya crew with
Had no purpose in life we cocked, popped, and proved it
The truth is...


3rd String-
truth is...we butter the waffles and put syrup on the biscuits
using rappers as food to feed the people's nutrition
your lines produce no buzz like a light beer on the bar
sipping on fillers only when I ice the repertoire
no history is missing me and I will expose the matter
just turn the lights on to watch the roaches scatter
a guns and butter factor but the fizzle of the toast is flatter
I speak to elites since lower levels only approach disaster
Knockouts get handed out on the next generations
pre-dealing with potential threats as a form of infiltration
laying down slap bass like in an eighties sex scene
booming across the fields of a writer’s wet dreams
while I gorilla press fiends for the one, two, three count
chumps tugging at the glitter robe to bust the seams out
but its double stitched so you slipped like water on rubber grips
thought you could compete? Must be something I missed
like water pistol target practice but I don’t play rehearsals
I brown paper bag trash like orders off of vibrator commercials




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I felt this shit went pretty hard.

Murk, you snapped all the way through with some purely disgusting multies. Shit had me pukin you came so sick with it. Not much more to point out. Props.

3rd, you dropped a pretty fire ass verse, as well. Your content was dope, I was only thrown off a few times by what hit me as a choppy flow, but I'm also high as a bitch readin this. It was a nice drop.

All in all, it was a nice collabo. I'd like to see more in the future.


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Flow was on point in both verses. Some decent multies. A couple good punchlines but I wouldn't say it was dense with them.

My favorite line right here:

So much fuckin food for thought, you grabbed the kitchen chair

I like 3rd's opening bar a lot, too.

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Niiiiiiiiiiiice. U mother fuckers came with it here.

Murk- ay man i like how u opened up. Rhymescheme really drew me in right off the bat. You had some dope lines in between which kept ur piece pretty solid throughout no doubt. One thing tho, maybe you can try blending your transition rhymes a lil smoother so it flows a lil nicer and doesnt just abruptly change rhymes. No biggie tho, still a nice verse man

3rd- maaaaaan you opened it up exactly how i imagined. With some off the wall shit haha. Man ive really become a fan of ur style. Nice rhymeschemes with some enjoyable content. I will have to agree with the hairy scoundrel with the choppiness on some of ur lines. But again, not a big deal, jus bein picky. Very dope verse as always my comrad.

I really enjoyed this collaboration friends. Murk it looks like you really been writing lately, this verse seemed to show a lil different approach from you for some reason. Solid tho. 3rd good shit man. You never cease to amaze me with your work. Like i mentioned, im a fan of your work.

Dope collab from two elite writers.

ENCORE!! Haha

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Thanks alot for the feed. Hoping to get a little more on this one. Up.

This is a real dope collab, one of the best to my knowledge. It reminded me of a bad meets evil piece with all the lyrical delicacies. Yall should do more collabs, I see a future for this 3rdkhuler duo.

*clap clap clap*

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damn man...nice vibe from both of y'all...y'all really did go ham on this one
the idea of this all was nice and kept me reading
I wish this was a bit longer though like you shoulda had another person on it
it's nice but doesn't feel complete towards the end
but still a nice as fuuuuuck piece keep writing you guys

Appreciate the feed!!!

this i liked... as everyone has said QB's opener was good... and he stayed comedic... with punches and "swag" lol... flow was also there...

Kuhler your flow was off the hook... punches were also there but u didnt over do it...

this came together well both of ur styles meshed well and it almost flow continuously... i wish i got on it... but i prolly would have screwed up the flow...