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-- Sat Sep 03, 2011 5:33 pm --

Ima take my gaff an hang you by it,
You hooked like ya on some phonics shit

Make ya breathin difficult, gas dis foo like posinous air,
Little bug squash you, steal ya shit leave ya left bare

Little ballerina ima make you dance,
Take my nine beat it wit it an take the 8 ball in ya pants

Make you my bitch ya be my slave that'll
Do everything i say than put you in a grave axel

I'll take good care of ya mom like a CNA
Nurse her while i fucker mornin evenin night of every day

Thas right bitch sit yo ass down on that chair
ill fuckin beater an not even care, lil bitch grow a pair

stand up to me an spit whats on yer mind,
wait you dont have one, if ya did it be hard ta find

Aight this be my last bar got me pissed off
like a pregnant bitches mornin sickness im done wit dis soft

My bad man i wasnt near a computer and i just figured out how to get on here with ma phone.

how you Fin to talk of graves when your bout to get ya ass kicked
and you did so dont complain when you get laid in a casket

You wanna do that mama thing well i put axel g apostrophe
s on her cuz now your ma belongs to me

Honestly your flow is just pathetic foo
You fuck with me ill leave you deader than that headless dude

you were just meant to lose you could blame ya fate
But dont blame cuz your the one Who shamed a name

matter fact ill take the blame you aint no lyric spitta
you just be talkin trash cuz all i hear is Litter

Im axel bitch so you dont really wanna hit
but heres some laxatives if you need help talkin shit

Do you really think youll win if you battle me
it aint reality and it will be your final fantasy

This shit is lame i cant believe this shit
this battle sucked i dont know why i agreed to it

VOTE=Axel

He had better usage of flow and multis and more direct hits with the punchlines, both dudes mad played with them "YO MAMA JOKES" but w/e... pretty straight forward win for Axel, all categories.

this battle was ok,
axel had more multies,both had flow,axel had more consistentcy and more stronger punches,axel had more personals,both had good structures,tie on the nameplay,but
good job to both emcees
MVGT: Axel Grave

MVGT- axel he had better punchlines while lyricspitta didnt really get to the point.

3-0 this should be closed

Axel wins KO