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Time to wrap it up get primed and ready
got that heavy flow steady breaking dams and levies
this man is deadly, he's on a mission from god
he's got your death certificate printed with assisted applause
with a written in clause stating the mistakes you made
time of death is today we're meeting face to face.
you can race for faith.. but that doesn't change shit
you still gonna go, forever cursed and name-less
mysterious and faceless. I pursue you for the capture
swinging my scythe recklessly maddened with laughter
your life doesn't matter, ya just a notch on the belt
i'll give you time to say goodbye for the cards are dealt
the scars of hell, still lurking fresh on my mind
its been 1000s of years but i aint testing the time
you stressing your mind.. trying to make your escape
but its too late you made your plate death is your fate
Fear the reaper, fear death cause the end is near
you can't blame god for hell.. cause its you that'll send you here

Another dope drop, Def. You always stay consistently on topic with some dope schemes and lines. I felt the subject matter here, it really speaks on a darker aspect of our society as applied to a religious agenda, but not overly so. Props, bruh.

Yo, loved the flow it was tight. Your subject line was ill too, it was a good read, particularly loved your ending, thought it hit home. Liked your play on death, and how your going to send me there. It be an honor to die at your hands. <lol

I agree with everything that has been said. I feel as if some things seem to be just thrown together, but if you carefully read the piece, then you can see how it all comes together... I liked the flow and smoothness of this one, with all the elements to bring the words to life for a reader. Its got alot of darkness built into it, maybe you would like to write a piece that's completely opposite this one and see how that comes together for you? Just a thought. Nice drop though bro. Keep writing!

dammit this piece was so nicely written... i really enjoyed reading this... the flow was real nice... i really like the way you handled this topic, and great imagery...