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-- Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:23 pm --

so your name makes this easy listen the lyrics leave mitty pissn/
see i dnt giva a damn bout who mitty dissn put the smitted to his fitted have mitty missin/

call me a young jim carry things get crazy when i put on the mask/
plus i have a jimmy neutron mindset 3 2 1 and i just gotta blast

soo call your crew up grab your vest your situations grave/
with the shotty im kinda like professor x i make his brain wave

i bust at em cuz my rounds are equivalent to that of an ox/
come at you with the techs/texts no message but they leave you in box

honestly i regret the day that mishap happen and you were made/
wen u were born your face was capared to a flashbang grenade

this closing bore isnt that impressive but i think honest it would behoove you to not ignore it/
cuz if he see these/CD'S rounds he gone PAUSE, ima let them thangs EJECT and put his lifespan on FAST FORWARD

lol swagg trying sum new everytime with closer

so your name makes this easy listen the lyrics leave mitty pissn/
see i dnt giva a damn bout who mitty dissn put the smitted to his fitted have mitty missin/
(flow was ok-ish,the punch really wasnt that cool)

call me a young jim carry things get crazy when i put on the mask/
plus i have a jimmy neutron mindset 3 2 1 and i just gotta blast
(this is trash)

soo call your crew up grab your vest your situations grave/
with the shotty im kinda like professor x i make his brain wave
(wasnt feeling this)

i bust at em cuz my rounds are equivalent to that of an ox/
come at you with the techs/texts no message but they leave you in box
(this was ok)

honestly i regret the day that mishap happen and you were made/
wen u were born your face was capared to a flashbang grenade
(not feeling this)

this closing bore isnt that impressive but i think honest it would behoove you to not ignore it/
cuz if he see these/CD'S rounds he gone PAUSE, ima let them thangs EJECT and put his lifespan on FAST FORWARD
(not feeling at all)

vs


Your rhymes are cheesier than a philly steak sandwich from the P-A,
The only thing I can say about your raps is that they be-played/
(nice nameplay,decent flow,ok multies,an ok personal,decent punch)

Even more so than wii-games so when you lose it won't seem-strange
why the critics and competition scream-change you need to reDEEM-brains/
(good multies,and ok punch)

Against me you get smoked like a weed-strain and I toke like a fiend-mayne
So to me it's to easy for you to be-slain.....prepare to be de-named
(decent multies,personal and punch)

You're no plague you ain't sick, ain't nothin about you arson o genic
More like a hypochondriac, who may be on fire with the ladies at the laundry-mat/
(decent multies ,personal,nameplay,and punch)

I drop bombs on mc's like the US looking for where sadaam-be-at, when I'm through
With you, you'll be relocated to where the zom-bies-at, can't get the "W" from-me-back/
(ok flow,ok wordplay,ok punch)

See what you lack is the love for the game is what I'm saying to you, you prick
To attack Mitty is a compliment, "you try to burn all those that are sick"/
(ok flow,ok personal,nameplay,and punch)

this was an ok battle both had punches,and flows it was a close call but
mvgt mitty

PLAGUE

so your name makes this easy listen the lyrics leave mitty pissn/
see i dnt giva a damn bout who mitty dissn put the smitted to his fitted have mitty missin/

flow was decent but the punch didnt hit hard

call me a young jim carry things get crazy when i put on the mask/
plus i have a jimmy neutron mindset 3 2 1 and i just gotta blast

this was a trash bar

soo call your crew up grab your vest your situations grave/
with the shotty im kinda like professor x i make his brain wave

decent nice personal with the crew but it could have been better if you were to mention the crews name

i bust at em cuz my rounds are equivalent to that of an ox/
come at you with the techs/texts no message but they leave you in box

the set up was bad but the punch was decent

honestly i regret the day that mishap happen and you were made/
wen u were born your face was capared to a flashbang grenade

not really feeling this

this closing bore isnt that impressive but i think honest it would behoove you to not ignore it/
cuz if he see these/CD'S rounds he gone PAUSE, ima let them thangs EJECT and put his lifespan on FAST FORWARD

a pretty decent closer

MITTY

Your rhymes are cheesier than a philly steak sandwich from the P-A,
The only thing I can say about your raps is that they be-played/

decent nameplay, and an OK punch

Even more so than wii-games so when you lose it won't seem-strange
why the critics and competition scream-change you need to reDEEM-brains/

good multies

Against me you get smoked like a weed-strain and I toke like a fiend-mayne
So to me it's to easy for you to be-slain.....prepare to be de-named

good personal and punch

You're no plague you ain't sick, ain't nothin about you arson o genic
More like a hypochondriac, who may be on fire with the ladies at the laundry-mat/

amazing personals and nameplay

I drop bombs on mc's like the US looking for where sadaam-be-at, when I'm through
With you, you'll be relocated to where the zom-bies-at, can't get the "W" from-me-back/

flow was off but decent wordplay

See what you lack is the love for the game is what I'm saying to you, you prick
To attack Mitty is a compliment, "you try to burn all those that are sick"/

OK closer and personal


MVGT- MITTY.

i respect moneys vote blake u r trash how can u call a bar trash when a setup 4 my bar is equal to one of ur hardest punches???? the fuck outta here winning by no shows dnt make u a good battler change professions..........swagg

by no means should you respect moneymaker's fake ass lol, but i would have to give it to mitty, it seemed he had better personal punches. you were throwing kind of broad ones out there, not that some weren't good. I liked the techs message line. but i was feeling mitty' flow, multis and rhymes a little more.

Mitty wins KO