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Just shakin some dust off...

There was a time that I thought that I would never make it/
That the scales were too corrupt to ever measure greatness/
Wished for better days, wished to be forever weightless/
So I could rise faster, the effort seems to tests your patience/
Tryin to seperate shit, tryin to filter out the bad and worst/
Tryin to crack my way in, hopin that this hammer works/
Battered nerves make me have an urge to tip the liquor back/
And I figured that it would translate into some sicker raps/
But my picture's black, my future is undeveloped/
I got a dream, but its gonna take months to sell it/
Haters runnin jealous, tryin to slow momentum/
But I got too much on my plate to ever go against em/
So I just ignore em now, got shit thats more important now/
Like wringin my soul until these fuckin flows are pourin out/
Aimin for Jordan's crown, but playin in another sport/
Paintin with the blood of war, but I act like this shit is such a chore/

Not much to say about this piece. It's all there, rhyme wise and whatnot. Pretty nice expression of thoughts and all that. I feel ya on the shaking the dust off thing. Nice drop.

not bad, i like the over all concept of it, it flowed well, multies were all solid, could of used more through out thou, but nice work respect.

dope.

Nice drop. Solid flow. Great multi's. Some sick metaphors. Nice way to shake the rust off. Of course, I would like to see something more topical-like, but you did your thing on this piece. Good to see you back in the Written Section.