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ill drop ya ass leave you in a 3rd world kulture/
they wont eat your dirty ass so i left ya for the vultures/
im proverb im so dope i rock the mic with the pope/
before i steal ya coat ill slit ya throat your family dont have a hope/
dog ill leave ya ass missin they'll put ya on a carton/
shoot at ya ass ill have kulture dancin like carlton/

-- Thu Aug 25, 2011 6:31 pm --

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-- Thu Aug 25, 2011 7:23 pm --

haha nice battle bro cant wait to do work with u

you might panic kid, as i land it quick,
i GOT LIFE,i burn Proverbs more than those satanic kids,
you gotta go,you'll die in time,i got a goal,
Im dropping proverb,more than the times Michael Jordan was beyond the gold,
Im breaking pro faster than Tony Hawks past exhaustion,
you'll get smashed,caution,UR Career gets trashed more than any coffins,

ill drop ya ass leave you in a 3rd world kulture/
they wont eat your dirty ass so i left ya for the vultures/
(the name play was ok-ish,the flow was ok-ish,the punch was ight,)

im proverb im so dope i rock the mic with the pope/
before i steal ya coat ill slit ya throat your family dont have a hope/
(the flow was there,but i think this punch could have been better)

dog ill leave ya ass missin they'll put ya on a carton/
shoot at ya ass ill have kulture dancin like carlton/
(^ lol at shoot at ya ass,you crazy lol,the flow was ok-ish,funny bar)
(the punch could have been stronger)

vs


you might panic kid, as i land it quick,
i GOT LIFE,i burn Proverbs more than those satanic kids,
(multies were decent,nameplay was decent,punch was decent)

you gotta go,you'll die in time,i got a goal,
Im dropping proverb,more than the times Michael Jordan was beyond the gold,
(the multies were ok-ish,punch was ight)

Im breaking pro faster than Tony Hawks past exhaustion,
you'll get smashed,caution,UR Career gets trashed more than any coffins,
(flow was ok,punch was ok,not a bad ender)

this battle was a close decision,both did have strong bars,both had their structures on point,thats a tie,and as far as multies i think kult had more multies,both had flow yall tied with the flowing,now honestly there wasnt a single personal in this battle,you guys need to research each other try and use more personal information against your opponent,i think kult used nameplay/nameflips more and also seems like kult had more punches and more overrall consistency MVGT kulture

Flow- Pro.
Nameplay-Tie
Meta/Simile-tie
Enjoyment-Kul
Punch-Kul

MVGT-KULTURE

1-0 Kulture

Hem You Need To Leave at least a half ass explanation on why you voted the way you did. Im sure you would appreciate the same

you might panic kid, as i land it quick,
i GOT LIFE,i burn Proverbs more than those satanic kids,
Decent multis, plus a good punch @ the last line, 3/5

you gotta go,you'll die in time,i got a goal,
Im dropping proverb,more than the times Michael Jordan was beyond the gold,
a typical basketball reference, kinda played, but not bad - saw multis aswell .. 2/5

Im breaking pro faster than Tony Hawks past exhaustion,
you'll get smashed,caution,UR Career gets trashed more than any coffins,
Not seeing any hard hitting punchlines, could've atleast made the 'coffin' a reference to something, again decent multis .. 2/5

7/15

ill drop ya ass leave you in a 3rd world kulture/
they wont eat your dirty ass so i left ya for the vultures/
A decent play with his name, but very weak IMO .. 2/5

im proverb im so dope i rock the mic with the pope/
before i steal ya coat ill slit ya throat your family dont have a hope/
Rock the mic with the pope .. aint the dude fucking kids? lol .. I liked the multis .. 3/5

dog ill leave ya ass missin they'll put ya on a carton/
shoot at ya ass ill have kulture dancin like carlton/
don't see the point of using carton, I get what you're trying to say in the second line, but again it was VERY weak and POINTLESS .. 1/5
6/15


It wasn't the best battle from the both of you ... IMO it was very weak, definitely need some elevation. Not tryna hate, just saying it like it is,
This was a one-sided battle aswell...Kultrue came out more stronger considering he had more punches than proverb, plus he included more multis which made his flow better than Proverbs...

MVGT - KULTURE

You two definietly got potential, just keep on doing what you doing, and work hard, good luck .. peace

PROVERB
ill drop ya ass leave you in a 3rd world kulture/
they wont eat your dirty ass so i left ya for the vultures/
(Decent nameplay, but your intro could've came harder this was very basic)

im proverb im so dope i rock the mic with the pope/
before i steal ya coat ill slit ya throat your family dont have a hope/
(I'm not sure about the rock the mic with the pope thing...rhymed though, your multies are kinda hard to follow the ill threw me off but I get it)

dog ill leave ya ass missin they'll put ya on a carton/
shoot at ya ass ill have kulture dancin like carlton/
(I see a funny image when I read this but CORNY none-the-less)

KULTURE
you might panic kid, as i land it quick,
i GOT LIFE,i burn Proverbs more than those satanic kids,
(Nice start with the multies and nice punch to finish this bar)

you gotta go,you'll die in time,i got a goal,
Im dropping proverb,more than the times Michael Jordan was beyond the gold,
(Played out...but I see you are to sticking with the multies. You could do better than this though)

Im breaking pro faster than Tony Hawks past exhaustion,
you'll get smashed,caution,UR Career gets trashed more than any coffins,
(All I can say about this bar is that it rhymes with multies)


Flow- KULTURE
Nameplay-KULTURE
Multies-KULTURE
Enjoyment-TIE
Punch-KULTURE

The stats say it all MVGT: KULTURE

Kulture wins KO