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-- Tue Aug 23, 2011 12:17 pm --

lets get this over with...


Blake start scribbling notes!

My rhymes got that vigor-and-soul that leave ya miserable n shiverin-cold..
im thinkin-u'll-fold! I push to win cuz I "shove-L" similar to diggin-for-gold!!
My flow'll put this trick-in-a-hole!! Fear you? nah my bars you can hardly-handle
leave ya scarred-n-mangled, cuz what my lines Drew.."Bury-more" than Charlie's-Angels!!
Arv-is-dangerous.. this bozo's-the-weak-type cuz those wins offa no-shows-dont-mean-nice..
my whole-flows-so-sweet-right? while u throw poor punches similar to hobos-in-street-fights!
I go-go-like-green-lights..multis seen-as-the-baddest, lines of fire streakin-like-matches..
Don't wanna run u out so im givin u slack kid..for the site's sake of keeping-it-active!!
Can't believe-ur-so-wack-bitch, i dont take u seriously there's no required-emphasis!
Leave ya face with bright-blemishes when i slap "BLAK" around like them 50's white-supremacists!

you'll die among plans,go ahead jerk,nothings as white as ur dance,
i've scene virgins vaginas that arent event tight as your pants
what you supposed to be some kind of homeless faggit,u look gayer than magic
arvincible,nobody knows this faggit,arv' gonna keep gettin mad... shit
you uneducated-fuck,learn how to read and/or write something,its all the truth,
see I know ur a dropout,but if you keep that style,ur teeth will follow suit,
ive mastered this as you witness blues,its a disaster,thats your news,
i see ur face,my fists will slip-on faster than your shoes,
i bring a higher class-out,lyrically ur getting raped more than a fat-spouse,
arvincible got my window of opportunity looking more like a glass-house,

-- Tue Aug 23, 2011 3:30 pm --



-- Tue Aug 23, 2011 5:09 pm --

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/thu-h ... 23677.html

dude omg arv murdered that drew bury more line....SWAGG mvgt arv blake didnt do as bad this time

Arv.
My rhymes got that vigor-and-soul that leave ya miserable n shiverin-cold..
im thinkin-u'll-fold! I push to win cuz I "shove-L" similar to diggin-for-gold!!
lol with the word play man, nice rhyme schemes as well
My flow'll put this trick-in-a-hole!! Fear you? nah my bars you can hardly-handle
leave ya scarred-n-mangled, cuz what my lines Drew.."Bury-more" than Charlie's-Angels!!
lmfao, again, wordplay, nice punch... but im yet to read any personals *sad face here*
Arv-is-dangerous.. this bozo's-the-weak-type cuz those wins offa no-shows-dont-mean-nice..
my whole-flows-so-sweet-right? while u throw poor punches similar to hobos-in-street-fights!
lmfao, your multies are the highlight fool.
I go-go-like-green-lights..multis seen-as-the-baddest, lines of fire streakin-like-matches..
Don't wanna run u out so im givin u slack kid..for the site's sake of keeping-it-active!!
lol. Dope again with the rhyme scheme, and site personal.
Can't believe-ur-so-wack-bitch, i dont take u seriously there's no required-emphasis!
Leave ya face with bright-blemishes when i slap "BLAK" around like them 50's white-supremacists
lol, nice finish.

Overall pretty solid man, not bad at all, and IMO your rhyme scheme tied into punches is what shined the most. Not much on personal bashes though.







Blake
you'll die among plans,go ahead jerk,nothings as white as ur dance,
i've scene virgins vaginas that arent event tight as your pants
lol, funny avy diss personal, mutlies pretty good as well.
what you supposed to be some kind of homeless faggit,u look gayer than magic
arvincible,nobody knows this faggit,arv' gonna keep gettin mad... shit
eh, not really feeling this bar man. The ending felt a little forced to be honest.
you uneducated-fuck,learn how to read and/or write something,its all the truth,
see I know ur a dropout,but if you keep that style,ur teeth will follow suit
meh, nice attempt.
ive mastered this as you witness blues,its a disaster,thats your news,
i see ur face,my fists will slip-on faster than your shoes,
the punch was pretty cool, but the set up or line one, is kinda not so much
i bring a higher class-out,lyrically ur getting raped more than a fat-spouse,
arvincible got my window of opportunity looking more like a glass-house,
lmfao at the punch, easily my favorite bar.


All in all though, not the greatest I've read from you. You nicely weave punches when you throw them, but it seems like you dont like to focus much cuz you're in and out, hit or miss.














Arv gets my vote, he was consistent, better rhyme scheme which helped the flow, and all together a better battle piece.

punches: arv
flow:arv
multis:arv
enjoyment:arv

vote:arv

This really isn't even close.

2-0 uppin

Punches go to arv he kept more consistent, blake came hard but arv edges this
flow goes to arv his structure just made it a more fluent read
multies go to arv, this is what made his verse standout
personals go to blake
enjoyment is a tie

blake had some nice punches n all but arv had a solid drop all round, panda pretty much explained things perfectly imo

MVGT: Arvincible

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