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Proud American

Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2011 6:07 am
by Proverb
I ain't a proud American cuz i ain't a savage barbarian
Yo I'm an anti-Aryan, humanitarian alien
If a hater steps in my area ill bury them like ancient Sumerians.
Sometimes i feel like young Anakin
in a world full of deaf, blind and dumb mannequins
who contaminate this planet's face like a billion viral pathogens.
Earth's a host for the parasites
Close my eyes and fantasize of a paradise
where people ain't dying, starving and terrified
Hiphop aint dead, the mainstreams just paralyzed
are you suprised the game needs baptized
or are you suprised the game needs circumsized
cause i was chastized my words revised
but in my eyes i had already paid the price
to be precise this rhyme will hafta suffice
cause in the end these bitches aint worth my life

Re: Proud American

Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2011 10:25 am
by AntiMaTTer
Proverb wrote:I ain't a proud American cuz i ain't a savage barbarian
Yo I'm an anti-Aryan, humanitarian alien
damn...this was fucking nice, why aint you always spittin like this in battles?

If a hater steps in my area ill bury them like ancient Sumerians.
Sometimes i feel like young Anakin
in a world full of deaf, blind and dumb mannequins
who contaminate this planet's face like a billion viral pathogens.
flow is really good so far, good vocab and some knowledge droppin

Earth's a host for the parasites
Close my eyes and fantasize of a paradise
where people ain't dying, starving and terrified
Hiphop aint dead, the mainstreams just paralyzed
are you suprised the game needs baptized
or are you suprised the game needs circumsized
cause i was chastized my words revised
but in my eyes i had already paid the price
to be precise this rhyme will hafta suffice
cause in the end these bitches aint worth my life

everything remained on point throughout. dope drop
i actually was surprised to see you drop this. try elevating on
this style and implement it into battling. this shit was tight stay grindin