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I was a bit skeptical about postin some shit here that I didn't make here. This is an old verse I wrote for a feature, I pulled a few lines that I don't want bitten and edited to make it a more fluid read...
enjoy...

when I was 16 my 16's were burstin tapes/
now it's Ipod's to cd's my verse escapes/
downloading mp3's while each person waits/
Sell em like chinese rugs and persian plates/
Theyin sellin fear over hear and they servin steaks/
forever rapin mother earth till her cervix breaks/
Word's relate~ to those of the third estate/
The one thing we do control is the murder rate/
see I think evil runs deeper then a thirst of papes/
if we could only trace it back to man's first mistakes/
Like owning land and treating men like worthless apes/
livin with rats given birth to nervous snakes/
within his raps find the worth that the wordsmith makes/
or I can dumb it down till the learning curve is strait/
take a ride around town in this suburban state/
swerve and skate right up to virgins gate/
saturated in love but somehow submerged in hate/

-- Sun Aug 21, 2011 1:44 pm --

I didn't see a rules thread but assuming one must provide a feedback link

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