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Due whenever, lets try to keep it in the weekend, ill be working Tomorrow too so it may take me little more time to finish depending how wasted i get this weekend, and other variables.


10 lines min
12 lines max.

Explained votes, no b/s d/r or hate votes.

i feel you on that so i misewell get it now...


Anti you do cock back/
shove my dick in ya mouth so you cant talk back/
ya jaw cracks as you get slapped with my jockstrap/
and boy you dont run shit so you'll have to walk back/
you got no way to fight i cleverly write/
anti spends all day on what hes gotta say tonight/
you wannabe tight but your death is on file/
if you wannabe tight TIP try not havin anal sex in awhile/
anti im still waitin for you to come out the closet/
the only time this cat shuts his mouth is for seamen deposits/

ill only do 10

word, ill match your 10.

ill have it done prolly by tonight. this is my check in

-- Sun Aug 21, 2011 6:33 am --

I Son Em Fights! or ill just BEAT EM WITH RHYMES!...
Then steal his Thunder And Light!...grinning while hes BLEEDING AND DIES...
Bet you Stutter On Mics, plus only people "Feeling Verbs" is the "LEGALLY BLIND"!!...
This kids is In Need Of A Life! Straight RIPPIN THIS LAME BITCH as im FISTIN HIS FACE IN ...
So when my punchs go "IM-PROV(inprov)" i aint talking about IMPROVISATION!...
So Listen You Aint Sick! my spits cause TOXIC EROSION...
And if you're a "PRO-VERB" Then im the PROPHET WHO WROTE IT!!...
No Stopping The Omen as i Graph your Demise seriously this bitch dont FLOW AT ALL...
Ya just Wack With Those Lines, and Army of 3 run this shit so no one needs a "PRO-TO-COL"!!....(pro-to-call)


9 lines.

lets get some votes on this peeps!!

Anti, you've come harder than this before...why are you gamin'? Plus you said you'd match Verb's 10 and you came out with 9, less than the stated minimum for this battle.

Verb I've read like three of your drops today and i see some potential in your work, I'd just like to see more consistency.

Flow - Verb. Anti, you dropped an odd number of bars and that threw me off from the top.

Personals - Anti, even tho I wasn't feeling the flow, you did come out with more personals. Verb once again a lot of the punches could be used with anyone and calling dude gay isn't a personal when it's not backed up.

Punches - Anti by far in this one although I did like verbs last two lines:

anti im still waitin for you to come out the closet/
the only time this cat shuts his mouth is for seamen deposits/

Enjoyment - Tie, it would go to Anti but the 9 line verse left me thinking, why couldn't you just drop another line?

Overall- MVGT: Anti. Verb came as I've gotten accustomed, but it wasn't nearly enough for Anti even though he dropped an irregularly odd verse.

lol anti would say u have to expand your horizon!!

flow - Tie. Anti's dragged and his grammar structure was hard to read.. both were too focused on the punch and not the delivery, im not trying to read yo momma jokes, my suggestion is to have more inner rhymes... and not forced ones
personal - anti: some nameplays were cool and much better than what proverb had, i dont think proverb was personal at all
punches - anti hands down.

mvgt anti

Umm yeah.. jayzon ur a homo..
Anti destroyed proverb in every cat
Vote. Anti

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3-0 KO right?

and im not going to bother with yall votes...
reason i did NINE lines was to be...sarcastic, and be like
"Yo you suck, ill beat you with one line less" but i you guys
didnt catch that obviously.


Yo Scott, good looking out fam, AO3 running shit!

-- Sun Aug 21, 2011 12:42 pm --

jayzon_black wrote:Anti, you've come harder than this before...why are you gamin'? Plus you said you'd match Verb's 10 and you came out with 9, less than the stated minimum for this battle.

You werent "feeling my flow" even though i flowed way better than Verbs? No offense just saying. idk your vote sounds like a paradox to me.

and there was no reaso to "come harder"...like i said nothing personal,
but that verse wasnt too big a threat, yadamean? so ... why put
effort and waste time when itd be a shut out regardless.


good battle though verbs, keep at it. 1

haha yea good battle gotta lose some ta win some i guess still young and feeling around with the flow and what not everything else like punchlines and shits new to me i usually get away with havin a good vocab and what not ya feel me but ima keep tryin and the next time you battle me wont feel so easy ya dig ?

Just a quick recap, Anti, I did say you handled none the less. Even though you dropped 9 it didn't feel like it was on purpose, Drake had a verse where he said he was so fly he can give up a line or something to that effect and it played right into the track. Here it didn't come across with that same heat. I know you're talented and true you didn't need to come with your fire to beat this cat, all I'm saying is I've heard better from you and the 9 bar wasn't presented the best it could be. Nonetheless you still got my vote so to scottydickrider, quit hatin' we all got opinions, and to Anti, a W is a W no matter how it comes.