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Due 72 hours(3 days) from time of this thread
First to 5 votes (3-0=ko/4-1=tko). Each day late is 1 against you
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Categories
-Storytelling
-Flow
-Creativity
-Rhyme scheme
-Metaphors & Similes
-Consistency
-Impact


Topic: Blinded by science

so friday or sat? itd be nice if its due Sat.and how many lines?



i request this for saturday or ima kick you in the ovaries Evo.. -_-



ill have my verse up by today word up.



....uh..really rushed but w/e..blah. didnt get into the topic as much as i wanted to.


They say "Knowledge is Power", look up "Science" in Latin and it Translates Into Knowledge...
And whos Hands Making Our College? its the Masons Creation who Stand Facing ya Conscious...
Its Basically Nonsense, Science was created to form Testable Logic...
Electrical Products capable of Measuring Comets or any sense of whats Cosmic...
From Astro-Physics to Quantum Mechanics, with Astral Precision they Ponder the Planets...
Honor the Canvas they paint with Mathematical Visions on a Radical Mission they try to Cover And Bandage...
Our Mother the Planet and our Function in Life but science just Corrupted Our Minds...
Investing in the Production of Light, which has a double meaning to it and im Reluctant to Lie...
It aint a Fuckin Disguise but thats another topic, where would the world be without the minds of Neil Bohr...
Aside that you may Feel Bored without all the technological advancements nor suits like the Navy Seals Wore...
Nor Steel Swords or anything mankind has Crafted and trust me when i say Science is Far from Mastered....
It was advanced by the minds of Aristotle and Socrates, using Scientific Methods they worked Hard to Gather...
And still yet to perfect it, check in their records, Socrates was a Prodigy who Excelled In Philosophy...
Stellar with Rational Thinking intertwined with Science then Bind and Meld It with Geometry...
These were only a fraction of the best men in Science and its useless even Trying to Fight it...
And if Lucifer is the Bearer of Light...its no wonder man-kinds Blinded By Science... -16

Lets make it happen....

so much for Scotts prediction on the tourny lol.

he'll show... just wait..

i know anti probably edited his verse in late, so im giving shazo until midnight EST. to drop his verse

oh nooooo i win

been a busy couple of days. will try and have somthin up sometime tonight

word... mabe i should have took my time but oh well, im up by 1 vote. cuz im fucking tough.

i told ya he'll show....now... lets get Anti's casket ready

youll need a 10-foot casket just for my dick to fit in. faggot.

rushed...but something so you wouldnt waste a verse.


Labeled a heathen, mistreated because of the things I refuse to believe in
They'll challenge and contradict with the most futile of reasons
Constantly find myself on the defense, my strategy to challenge a contradiction with a truth
I could try to reason with these peons...but at the end of the day whats the use?
Its just a bunch of theories created by man with no signs of facts or evidence
I feel as most lack intelligence, and these arguments they bring dont have a tad of relevance
So am I a devil? am I evil, just because I choose the path of what seems most logical
All of these arguments they throw at me seem irrational and borderline impossible
I feel its a deception of truth, they still doubt each direction I prove
its getting to the point I start to question whos's the fool
Now as I lay on my death bed, not ready to leave earth I close my eyes to go peacefully
I did something I never thought I would, It feels like I sacraficed a huge piece of me
For once I chose to believe in faith, but is it too late as I walk towards the gate of heaven
Is it too late I question? I reach the front of the line and I just sit and stare for a second
I come face to face with god himself, he shakes his head and closes both of his eyelids
And before I fall to hell I hear "Sorry I cant grant access to those who deny me to be blinded by science"



sn: those arent really my views on the situation..all for sake of the topic

Storytelling: Shazo, his verse felt like a story while Anti's felt more like a very informative rant.
Flow:Anti, his verse flowed smoother.
Creativity:Shazo...Anti showed amazing knowledge of what h was writing about but it was more imformative than creative. Shazo went with a more creative story.
Rhyme Scheme:Anti, he had better flow and rhyme scheme.
Metaphors & Similes: Shazo.
Consistency:Tie, both were consistent with the style they went with.
Impact: Tie, both made of the best of what angle they chose to take on this topic.

Vote: Shazo

This might be the best match up of the tourney so far. An Amazing job done by both of these gentlement.

-Storytelling: Shazo.. had a story, while Anti had a lot of examples of science
-Flow: Tie..both had some super longs bars with lack of inner multis and then a few really good lines with everything, i couldnt pic which one for this cat.
-Creativity: Shazo had the standpoint of a man blinded by science and I think thats what brought the best out of this topic
-Rhyme scheme: same as flow but as far as more multi connections it was Anti..
-Metaphors & Similes: n/a shazo had imagery while anti had information
-Consistency: Antimatter had more consistent lines as far as his direction was going.
-Impact: Shazo had more of a wow-factor in this battle. Even though everyone has this whole twist in the end attempt in the tourney I was a fan of the fact that his character was punished for his views in the end. it was nice.

Anti's verse was not bad either, Im not taking anything away from this guy's talents..his multis were good, his delivery was on point but Shazo's verse had more of what I wanted to see to take the vote here..his storytelling category and simplicity won here..

MVGT: Shazo


and btw: I'm tired of here participants say "ehh whatever this was rushed" when they had all this time to write this, dont complain when u lose after you say you half assed a battle lol.. If you're going to write it take time on it.. stope the bitchin k bye

word

whats the count at now?


[makes sense to get rid of the bigger threat early on...BAHAHA ]