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okay this one is for the final round of that other tourney im in it will also go on Island Mojo's next mixxtape...i'm probably gonna win the whole tourney..too bad it was a ho show fest...people always no show when i drop first...the task was to make a song about the State of Hip Hop so i took my spin on it....anyway lmk whut ya think..always return feed...


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Its kinda funny I was just saying I don't really listen to music anymore because of the direction it has taken... real sad... but this drop is hot I was feeling the hook... very catchy... and the first verse was the best part though flowed better imo

right on E..thanks for the feed du'...yeah i slapped this together qwik..wrote it to a different beat then ended up not bein able to use that beat cuz the quality was waaay too assy...

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this what the fuck im talking bout.... shit banging bro. Ill def be peep some more of yo tracks. glad i took the time to peep this.

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I like topic, the flow was str8 and the lyrics brought the concept out perfectly...I wasnt really feeln the chorus too much, the beat is hot tho...the lyrics make this piece stand out, gl on the tourney man and good wrk

thanx bro i feel you it was a qwik right and record..
so i'll be puttin another layer on it to give it a lil More Swag..

Big ups on the Feed guys keep it comin ..feed is returned
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I like your flow and. Wish i could be that clean.

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Thank you a bunch bro..haha this is actually NOT one of my cleaner tracks...Thanks

Aight man i aint gon let u vote and feed all my shit without me returning the favor. Haha

Nice beat selection man. Ive always like that instrumental no doubt.

Your first flow was waaaaaay nicer than the second imo. It jus flowed way better, compared to the second. Your multies really stood out like a mo fucka man. I really like ur rhyme schemes on it.

You spoke about some real shit man. U kinda refreshed everyone on how the industry is headin today. Personally, it almost sounds like a diss towards hip hop. Haha and ive been on the other end of ur disses before and...... Dont feel too good. Haha

You really hit alotta shit on the head wit ur research man. Some tru shit. Nice spin man. Im sure this woulda placed high in ur tourny even if heads didnt ho show. Dope piece man. Very enjoyable

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Big Ups everyone for the feed...and yeah Loon i won that Tourney...

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flow is weird it hits perfectly but seems like a better beat could have made it an all around instead of juss a nasty verse... if you know what i mean


beat could have been a little louder as well

love the hook makes perfectly good sense

you got a nice voice for this shit bro...

love how you go and talk about real shit everything is spoken correctly and exactly how i feel

lyrics are on point bro has been in almost every song i have heard from ya and to be honest i wish the song was a little longer to juss hear moreof what you gotta say (a good thing)

i DO wish you filled in them blanks thow where it's all juss instrumental between verse to hook ect.

overall 8/10

keep it up brooo!!! and lookin forward to the next drop

There are some moments where it feels like your channeling Cannibus ... you kinda slip into it and then ease back ... nothin' wrong with that. "Hip Hop Currently ...{Hip Hop}<---comes off awkward ... I would say it was a long breath but it's the same in the second hook.

Cool beat ... Good concept ... Stayed on topic ... Clear

I feel you on the "emergency" diagnosis ....

Ayo real talk we need more cats like you around...tbh i knew there was somethin a lil off about da hook but couldnt put my finger on it...youer analysis was right on imo..so im actually gonna make the change on it b4 i drop the mixxtape with that...thank you..

dont go ghost on us dude i wanna set up a colab bruh...1