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Domino vs. -=Tramatik=-
Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 5:48 am
by Momeijah
Kk Just in Case u Guys Are Wonderin i Called Him Out On Msn Lol
Ok Deadline Within The Next 36 Hours House Rules 5 Bars
This is My Check in LoL Peace
Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 10:39 am
by -TraMaTiK-
uhhhh i aint gonna promise my verse soon but im busy ,but i will key sumthin up soon -1-
Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 7:43 am
by -TraMaTiK-
checkin in
Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 7:59 am
by -TraMaTiK-
u no dude i think its time ta face facts
realize u aint the 'only star'-1
im'a erase dis kat sayin coppin my tracks
is da only way u gonna 'own me by far'-2
deadly flows ill put the lead ta clothes and switch ya staus ta 'losin twice'
the law says u gotta freedom of speech
but u juz fuckin abusin the rite -3
how u gonna be on my dick game, hey
y ur name domino when ppl say ur name iz john or tre?-4
fuck ur carrear son i hope u leave this battle 'havin a scar'
cuz its either that or up end up like the skull in ur Avatar! -5
theres 5 bars
1st bar - he only has one star in his status
2nd bar - explaintory i hope lol
3rd bar - obvious
4th bar - ppl call him Tre but his real name iz John
5th bar - the skull is in his pic on his status
gud luck --1--
Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 1:25 am
by Momeijah
The Way i Rap i'll Make u Wish illest(Lyrics) Had "Cheat-Codes" ..//
The Only Trauma ur Causin is Negative With Ya "Cheap-Flows" .//
ur Name Decorations Ain't Gnna "Win-u-Battles" ..//
i'll Spit at u "Bitch",So Hard You'll Be Like a Dog When it "Piddle-Paddles" ..// (Flooded in Spit, "Bitch" is a Dog, Swimmin in it Lol)
The "Trauma-is-Lethal" When i "Rip-a-Flow" And "Post-it" ..//
i "Don't-Win" i Str8 "Dominate-Ego's".. And "Leave-u-Roasted" ..//
i'll "Defeat-This-Broke-Bitch", Still Waitin For a Win? "Slice-Ya-Wrists" ..//
if i Ever Wrote Like u i'd Throw My Shit in The "Recycle-Bin" ..//
i'll Finish With a Punch ur Like a Female "Chicken, WANT COCKS" ..//
Change ur Avatar, u Liar Cuz it Says ILLEST LYRICS..."Dot Com" ..//
Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 6:00 am
by -TraMaTiK-
nice uppin -1-
Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 8:39 am
by TwIzTiD
Wow.....Uhhh...ok nothing to say.
Vote:Domino
-Twiztid
Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 11:59 am
by 8th
aigh this was a meh battle:
tramatik:
not really any quotables. There werent really any punches. Your writtens seem to be better than your battles. I would work on the structure of the verse, and work on your punches. Multis where there, but the flow was kinda off because of the structure.
domino:
i'll Finish With a Punch ur Like a Female "Chicken, WANT COCKS" ..//
Change ur Avatar, u Liar Cuz it Says ILLEST LYRICS..."Dot Com" ..//
^my favortie line i guess. You punches were kinda weak overall though. You had a good structure. Although i would have liked to see a few more multis, you did have some. I would just work on harder punches.
vote: domino
he came harder. He had a few semi-punches, but that was better than tramatiks.
both yall stay up and keep dropin.
Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 9:27 pm
by -TraMaTiK-
ye...thanx doe him 2-0
Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 11:57 pm
by Momeijah
LoL Nice Battle Dude. i Thought That Was 1 Of My More Weaker Verses Cuz it Was Pretty Much No Personals And My Name's Spelled JON Dammit Lmao
Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2006 6:13 am
by Onediversekid
Do I Even Have To Say It...
Domino : Took All Categorys i Thought
Tramatik's Verse Didn't intrest me at all
So Good Job Domino
Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2006 9:27 am
by Myzz.Understood
u no dude i think its time ta face facts
realize u aint the 'only star'-1
im'a erase dis kat sayin coppin my tracks
is da only way u gonna 'own me by far'-2
vs.
The Way i Rap i'll Make u Wish illest(Lyrics) Had "Cheat-Codes" ..//
The Only Trauma ur Causin is Negative With Ya "Cheap-Flows" .//
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i'll "Defeat-This-Broke-Bitch", Still Waitin For a Win? "Slice-Ya-Wrists" ..//
if i Ever Wrote Like u i'd Throw My Shit in The "Recycle-Bin" ..//
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Domino Seems Like He Used No Effort At All....Itz Clear His Multis Were There, Metaphors, And Punches....Tramatik Had At Least 1 Ok Punch And The Rest Seemed Played Or Just Wasn't Effective As His Opponent's Verse.....A Bit Weak On Both Ends However, Structure Was Horrible With Both, And Flow Was Just A Lil Off Also With Both Opponents....However Domino's Punches & Multis Did It 4 Me
v/ Domino
Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2006 3:33 pm
by Ambiguous Realm
domino abuses the dashes to its fullest extent lol... i'm not sure y u use -'s between words that only rhyme at the end lol... it kinda shows that u still rn't sure wat multis r.. but u did have them so that kinda took the win for u including ur punches... both of u could've done alot better.. but w/e
vote:domino
Posted: Fri Dec 08, 2006 9:33 pm
by complexity
-records updated-
nice battle