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6 bars/12 lines
3-0 KO first to 5 votes wins
due: sunday midnight

-- Thu Aug 04, 2011 3:33 pm --

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/enlig ... 23398.html

-- Thu Aug 04, 2011 3:34 pm --

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/shazo ... 23312.html

check check

-- Mon Aug 08, 2011 10:33 am --

He think Ima rookie watch me wreck him, shit on em and disrespect him
Let me expose him for a second, how he writes in caps to make some weak shit seem effective?
He the king of this jungle? Then Ima play scar,I'll knock em from the top watch him fall flat
Give him that mayweather treatment, and throw hits that'll knock his train of though off track
He gassed up So Ima add the fire and take him out with a bang,Scotty you're not an issue
When I think Scott, I think ass, shit, easy to rip..He reminds me of Scott tissue
Scott's not raw...army of two? I'll go to war, we can brawl..throw punches watch scott fall
Or I might send them shots that'll damage your liver but not the kind that fucked up Scott hall
I'll body em with no shame, If I'm eyeing your title you better start reachin for all hope James
And it does not impress me that you've built your name..off of beating no-names
So throw in them hyphens and caps-locks and all the decorative props you disperse
Ill drop em with words, and looking at the comment on your call out I would've ran through you with a topical verse

got lazy but not a no show..whoop whoop

I'm FAMOUS FOR DISSIN.. Think U Can Beat Me? Then Everything Ur SAYIN IS FICTION..
Cuz Im Quick To Draw Blades That'll Leave Sha-Shanked Without ESCAPING A PRISON!!
He Copys Me Like He TRACING MY WRITTENS.. So Ill Knock Him Down Worse Then When TOWERS HAD FELL..
Yall Know Im ROWDY AS HELL, Howdy! Yeah Ill "Greet U Wit My Fists" Like HOWIE MANDEL!!
That Punch Got Him DOWN, RING THE BELL.. Hell, I Heard His Girl Never FELT HIS PENETRATION..
Flaws? He Gotta Whole Lot Cuz Only Bitches Screamin O-SHA Are Members Of The HEALTH ADMINISTRATION!! (Look It Up)
Ill MELT HIS PIGMENTATION.. U Can TRY TO BOUNCE BACK But U Finna DIE THIS ROUND SHAZ..
Fuck Wit Me And Ill Ruin Ur Fate Yeah Ur "Futures At Steak" Like U APPLIED TO OUTBACK!!
My LIFES A SOUNDTRACK U Dont Wanna BRAWL WIT ME.. Spit Fire That'll Leave Ya Darker Than SOMALIA PEEPS..
Ur AWFULLY WEAK.. Yea All Ur "Topicals Anesthetic".. Cuz They Make Us All Wanna FALL ASLEEP!!
Wow.. That Jus Killed Him, Someone CALL POLICE!! Im Hotter Than LAVA ITS TRUE I'll CONQUER THIS NEWB..
FATHERIN YOU Respect Me Im AT The TOP OF THE BOOTH Plus Ive Won Tourneys U Should Feel HONORED TO VIEW!!

Night Night

Shazo you have to go at your opponent much harder, ScottJames did it the right way.

Punches: Scott
Flow: Scott
Enjoyment: Scott
Multies: Scott
Impact: Scott
Personals: Scott

Vote: Scott

yeah...cat sweep

scott had some very creative bars, i just didnt like how i had to look up something lol and that some beginning multis to go off the last punch didnt really match but i still enjoyed his verse more...

shazo i have a big hunch that you half assed this smh, ur battling scott and you see "meh at least its not a no show" but in your verse you contradict it by saying scott should hold on to his belt like youre gonna take it with that verse lol funny

mvgt Scott!

He think Ima rookie watch me wreck him, shit on em and disrespect him
Let me expose him for a second, how he writes in caps to make some weak shit seem effective?
Good Multi's
He the king of this jungle? Then Ima play scar,I'll knock em from the top watch him fall flat
Give him that mayweather treatment, and throw hits that'll knock his train of though off track
Ehh, No Punch
He gassed up So Ima add the fire and take him out with a bang,Scotty you're not an issue
When I think Scott, I think ass, shit, easy to rip..He reminds me of Scott tissue
Decent Punch
Scott's not raw...army of two? I'll go to war, we can brawl..throw punches watch scott fall
Or I might send them shots that'll damage your liver but not the kind that fucked up Scott hall
Decent
I'll body em with no shame, If I'm eyeing your title you better start reachin for all hope James
And it does not impress me that you've built your name..off of beating no-names
Okay
So throw in them hyphens and caps-locks and all the decorative props you disperse
Ill drop em with words, and looking at the comment on your call out I would've ran through you with a topical verseGood Personal Not Good Closer
6/10

I'm FAMOUS FOR DISSIN.. Think U Can Beat Me? Then Everything Ur SAYIN IS FICTION..
Cuz Im Quick To Draw Blades That'll Leave Sha-Shanked Without ESCAPING A PRISON!!
Best Line. Dope Personal
He Copys Me Like He TRACING MY WRITTENS.. So Ill Knock Him Down Worse Then When TOWERS HAD FELL..
Yall Know Im ROWDY AS HELL, Howdy! Yeah Ill "Greet U Wit My Fists" Like HOWIE MANDEL!!
Dope
That Punch Got Him DOWN, RING THE BELL.. Hell, I Heard His Girl Never FELT HIS PENETRATION..
Flaws? He Gotta Whole Lot Cuz Only Bitches Screamin O-SHA Are Members Of The HEALTH ADMINISTRATION!! (Look It Up)
Good Personal
Ill MELT HIS PIGMENTATION.. U Can TRY TO BOUNCE BACK But U Finna DIE THIS ROUND SHAZ..
Fuck Wit Me And Ill Ruin Ur Fate Yeah Ur "Futures At Steak" Like U APPLIED TO OUTBACK!!
Good
My LIFES A SOUNDTRACK U Dont Wanna BRAWL WIT ME.. Spit Fire That'll Leave Ya Darker Than SOMALIA PEEPS..
Ur AWFULLY WEAK.. Yea All Ur "Topicals Anesthetic".. Cuz They Make Us All Wanna FALL ASLEEP!!
Wow.. That Jus Killed Him, Someone CALL POLICE!!
Good Multi's
Im Hotter Than LAVA ITS TRUE I'll CONQUER THIS NEWB..
FATHERIN YOU Respect Me Im AT The TOP OF THE BOOTH Plus Ive Won Tourneys U Should Feel HONORED TO VIEW!!
Ehh Decent Closer
9/10
Mvgt: Scott

3-0 KO!!! its a wrap

good battle shazzy

good battle scott

Scott wins KO